Angels

Angels in the sky

Angels in heaven

Angels that fly

Angels lucky number seven

Angels right beside me

Angels right next to you

Angels hidden in a tree

Angels in the ocean oh so blue

Angels in your head

Angels in your mind

Angels heard everything you said

Angels aren’t hard to find

Angels here

Angels everywhere

Angels they take away all your fear

Angels they always play the game fair and square

Angels all around

Yet not all of them are found…..

This feels like a list... with an idea introduced at the end that is never really explored.

Honestly, it reads more like a brainstorm to get ideas than a finished poem. Maybe you could expand more on that last line and turn it into the focus?

Welcome, by the way.

thnx for your opinion but what exactly do you mean by putting more on to focus ??

Have it be the main subject of the poem instead of just being tacked on at the end. It's just a suggestion...

It was a simple poem. It was okay but maybe you could create some imagery.

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