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We were asked to write a short story with the title All alone in School. We were given an hour to P…Sat May 15, 2010 10:39 pm -

Please Remember Me “Does it hurt?” So soft, without blemishes or any scars. I finger it lightly, ru…Sat May 15, 2010 5:07 pm -

Hi. Well, I decided to write this after seeing a mini travelogue written in this style in the newsp…Sat May 15, 2010 9:56 am -

This is from a novel I am currently writing. Just wanted to see what people thought of this excerpt…Sat May 15, 2010 4:14 am -

I didn't understand the meaning of loving someone. Sure I said I love you plenty to my mother and f…Sat May 15, 2010 3:37 am -

Toast It was a fine morning in July. The sun was rising, birds were singing outside, and there were…Fri May 14, 2010 8:13 pm -
There are some errors I am aware of, like the paragraphing and other small errors but other than th…Fri May 14, 2010 3:31 pm -
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So I said, "Oh, that I had wings like a dove! I would fly away and be at rest." Sometimes I like to…Fri May 14, 2010 10:53 am -

This is the beginning of a longer work I am working on. Any comments and/or critiques would be most…Fri May 14, 2010 2:14 am -

Ok, so here's my attempt at revision. I took into account all the comments from everyone on here an…Fri May 14, 2010 1:38 am -

I had always loved spiders. I don't understand why most people are afraid of them. I think they are…Fri May 14, 2010 1:05 am -
Slowly, I walk down the stairs into the subway. I see a woman gently touch her lover on the arm, ma…Thu May 13, 2010 11:33 pm -

Locked fingers and toesthe finger growled at the toe and then bit it. the toe farted and then screamed and saw a biscuit. …Thu May 13, 2010 8:58 pm -

Watch as blood drips from every pore Poor bastard doesn’t know what’s in store The car’s speakers s…Thu May 13, 2010 7:59 pm -

(This is an epistolary from my writing class. Epistolary: series of journal entries between one or …Thu May 13, 2010 4:02 pm -

I lay here. Nothing enters my mind. My eyes don't pick up anything but black. I'm dead, not really …Thu May 13, 2010 3:55 pm -

My eyes fly open, and I look around, my husband's back presses against mine, as I prop up on my elb…Wed May 12, 2010 11:19 pm -
Just outside the Commons' dining room window, a soupy fog danced. Ghosts were manifesting out of th…Wed May 12, 2010 11:12 am -

Locked the fartthe fart was running and then fell. the fart smiled then people died. the fart took girls on dates …Tue May 11, 2010 11:11 pm -

Not completely sure if this is most appropriate here. Its a zombie short story I wrote. Feel free t…Tue May 11, 2010 11:58 am -

Death is an interesting thing. Selise was only sixteen and seven months when her body was found in …Tue May 11, 2010 4:59 am -

So this was the very first thing I ever wrote (creative writing, that is). It was for an English as…Mon May 10, 2010 6:37 pm -

There once was a dentist called Dr. Orwell. She was in need of coconuts, at least one hundred. They…Mon May 10, 2010 4:28 pm -

Burning. That's what I could smell, burning. Something was burning, the heat was searing against my…Mon May 10, 2010 1:37 pm -

My february CIA contest entry *edited*Mon May 10, 2010 9:01 am -

Depends on how many reviews i get!Mon May 10, 2010 8:37 am -

I would appreciate any sort of comment :) There have been many events which led me to writing this.…Mon May 10, 2010 3:12 am -

"The first step - especially for young people with energy and drive and talent, but not money - the…Mon May 10, 2010 12:45 am -

Chloe S taring at the wide selection of generic greeting cards of various sorts in front of me, a b…Sun May 09, 2010 10:45 pm -

Locked I Watched Disturbing CrueltyI find this work very amusing because it was written a long time ago and I had completely forgotten…Sun May 09, 2010 7:09 pm -

Janelle racked the brush through her shoulder length blond hair debating to go to her cousin’s part…Sun May 09, 2010 6:44 pm -

The smell of sweat and alcohol breath from too much beer seemed to get stronger with each minute th…Sun May 09, 2010 4:27 pm -

As Bijal squinted at the animals he saw that many of them held fruits in their hands or had them cl…Sun May 09, 2010 11:07 am -

A/N: For Galerius, Kylan, and smorgishborg's contest. (Links provided at the end to avoid spoilers.…Sun May 09, 2010 8:30 am -

There was nothing to hear except a cold, impenetrable silence that rested heavily upon the dankness…Sun May 09, 2010 8:07 am -

Okay, this is going to be the first part of a story I post on here, so be ruthless in your criticis…Sun May 09, 2010 2:53 am -

Both of my parents died on the side of Route 47 in Oklahoma. I watched. I don’t remember it being l…Sun May 09, 2010 2:36 am -
That night, I watched myself die. I was drowning, the water around me frozen. I didn’t even try to …Sat May 08, 2010 10:24 pm -
24.02.08 Sunday Weight – 33.6 Diet – about 10 spoons of porridge (74 calories) Burn - 125 crunches …Sat May 08, 2010 5:27 am -

A Look Into Decision… Defend. A word not often thought of without its consequence. Maybe that was h…Fri May 07, 2010 10:39 pm -

hey i know it's short but i just came up with it in the middle of a supermarket.. Alice “NO” I shou…Fri May 07, 2010 10:08 pm -

*From the conclusion of Tears of Fruit* "Rise up my friends!" the man shouted as he took in the cro…Fri May 07, 2010 5:49 pm -

Oranges, lots of oranges! Mya smelled the tropical fruit. She always went to the Brazillian Market …Fri May 07, 2010 1:50 pm -

I couldn’t tell you when it happened. Maybe it was when my parents decided they where going to “tak…Fri May 07, 2010 1:27 am -

Dear Diary, I swear I have just come back from the BORINGEST place on Earth. At first when Tim aske…Fri May 07, 2010 12:11 am -

here's the start of the only story i have come close to finishing. January 1st, 1989 Monday. 6:00am…Thu May 06, 2010 6:11 pm -

I couldn’t tell you when it happened. Maybe it was when my parents decided they where going to “tak…Thu May 06, 2010 4:40 pm -

Warning, rated 16 and older due to contents and maybe violence/gore. (Genre: Horror) I dug the obje…Thu May 06, 2010 4:10 pm -

I don't expect you to respond, but I'm freaking myself out. I'm killing myself with my own thoughts…Thu May 06, 2010 10:24 am
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