A light embraces me,
forever coiled in the flow.
I am now a servant of light,
with a destiny unknown.
I shall fight till the end,
for you and what I believe in.
Now till the end of time,
I am a servant of light.
Just something that was inspired from my book.
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i like this it keeps the reader wondering what is the servent of light and what does he have to fight. the flow of the words is smooth making it easy to read. if it truely was inspired by your storie then it makes the reader want to read the story becoz they are alot of questions that jump to mind when you read it.
I find myself wondering who or what the character was before he became the servant of light, if anything. I might recommend an opening stanza about whatever came before this miraculous, angelic being.