Young Writers Society

I'd like to remind everyone to leave CONSTRUCTIVE comments. If you liked it, what did you like about it? If you didn't, why didn't you?

And please, no randomness about scribbling...

Anyway. This poem was just okay to me. Good message, but so overstated that I wasn't really impressed. It felt more like dialogue between two characters than a poem, and I guess it was just a little too simple and bland for me. It didn't really stick in my mind, you know?

Good attempt, but I think maybe it just didn't have enough depth to it.

I am scribbling all over your piece of poetry

mwhahahahahahahahahahahahah ha ha BLLPT

No really i AM scribbling all over it. I liked it but it made my head hurt. owww........

I think it's pretty good...could end up in a book someday. Who knows!

Fael57

What is faith?
Is it what we see,
know,
hear,
feel,
or believe?

Could it be,
everything you once thought was true,
is gone.
Nothing but a lie.

That's for you do decide.
To believe in what you someone else tells you,
or,
to just and believe yourself.

avoid the scribble thing.

Another of your short good poem!

I liked the way it started.

Just one small thing, that in this para:

That's for you do decide.
To believe in what you someone else tells you,
or,
to just and believe yourself

It was okay, and I agree Nexus...it doesn't seem to have anything to do with faith, however, here is my critique.

On the first verse, last line, you should have ended it with a question mark instead of a period. Because, remember, your asking a question.

What is faith?
Is it what we see,
know,
hear,
feel,
or believe.

See? You began with Is it. Therefore, a question. Hope I helped!

Thank you, that's a very good. That was what I was geting at.

I liked it, though i couldn't see a total connectedness with faith, i found it more to do with life, but perhaps some could say life is fait, or faith is life for that matter. Reguardless good poem.