I can’t always confess how I feel.
I won’t always answer your call.
I’m sorry to say,
I can’t always be there for you,
But I’ll never forget, never let go, and never stop trying.
When two people care for one another,
Distance doesn’t matter.
Its not always the words we use,
Nor the gestures we make,
But how our hearts are connect.
One look and you’ll know,
A smile on his face,
A twinkle in his eye,
And a laugh at his breath,
Can mean more than anything.
He looks at you with that grin,
Locks you in his gaze,
Calms you with his joy.
True happiness comes from others,
Not just yourself.
I can give you that,
I’ll give it everyday.
I’ll always keep my word,
Keep that sacred promise,
To always remember and never forget.
I promise to smile for you in the morning.
I promise to always look at you with caring eyes.
I promise to always laugh with you and share my happiness.
Most of all, I promise to always think of you,
For true love doesn’t start with a word, it builds from the heart.
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Hey there!
This is sooooooo good!
it has a good story line, emotions, thoughts, depth.
it lacks a bit on the rhyming but not every poem needs t rhyme (but it makes it more interesting for a reader to read).
Anyway, very nice! I didn't find any grammar or punctuation mistakes.
the final line, I'm sorry, but it's so ... well... common I guess. Maybe even a little cliche (not sure).
Anyway, good work and keep writing!
that was honestly one of the best poems I've ever read!
ugh here I go again...I can never find anything wrong with the stuff I read!
anyways, it expressed what every person in a relationship feels but can't really find the words or the right time to say it.
it also allows the reader to feel the love and gentleness you implied in this poem.
over all, it was really really good
sorry for such a crappy review. lol write something bad next time!
til then