Young Writers Society

Maybe in place of 'perfectly curled' allude to the sound of the leaves to make the meaning more clear? I also was caught up in the imagery of leaf-symmetry and promises (true leaves are sharp flat edges, not afraid of their form. False liar-leaves curls with the weight of its wet, and forms sloppy messes ? Was my train of thought) - didn't realize the curl was not the sloppy wet leaf, but the dried, petrified crunchy ones.

I think a word choice to point us toward the sound/dryness versus the wet can help? (One of my fav poets used the term 'arthritic' leaves once, and I will always carry that with me, man! I wish I came up with it).

But other than that, I found it lovely in its ironic tone of decayed hope c:

Oi, Nite, so cynical and beautiful at the same absolute time.

It's wonderful.

Now, I will say that it takes a toll on the breath and could benefit from line breaks or structural consideration to give the reader some respite to put a soft pause inside what is a beautiful, albeit cumbersome, sentence.

Perfectly-curled gives us immaculateness, pristine nature. Stepping on this is a deliberate and clear breaking of perfect nature, and it's done knowingly--so applying this to broken promises. I feel the compulsion to apologize to you on behalf of the person who brought this out of you. It must be a horrible feeling.

All-in-all, excellent and short work, but the length without pause is a stretch. Consider for editing.
Ty