Hi,
I don't like giving short review, but I'm having quite a fate to face now...which the result will be severe to me and the saddest part is, I can't decide it.
Everything flows really good and I can almost agree with everything with Lightsong's review especially the way you made your poem simple but on point.
I just witnessed something on your poem:
She is the common mistress of the world--
used by all and loved by none.
I would like to highlight the phrase, used by all. I would stop on this and ponder about it a little. Is it really? Being blunt is good, but there must be logical reason to explain it. Don't express things only on your view. You should consider others'. Care for others' heart too.
That's all. Good work.
~Memo
Points: 3187
Reviews: 173
Donate