I loved this poem, and for amazingly short and sweet it was. So I'm going to write a really short review because there's not much to improve on.
This poem held my interest until the end, with your end rhymes intriguing me the entire way through. It was really easy to read, you had a simple, yet nice title, and you used excellent grammar. Be sure to write more like this, and do these things in this poem more often, because you did them well!
~Saruka
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