This is actually my first freestyle poem. Never tried one before because I'm usually into rhyming. Picked this topic because I was told it was disturbing to read about. Feel free to review or even just gimme an opinion.
From The Diaries of a Tortured Soul
Bolts of agony flash across my dying nerves,
One, two, three as I scream towards the sky.
Oh the sky, so mesmerizingly blue, so vast,
So calming in memory, the next three bolts dulled.
Both my hands fixed onto blistering wood,
Rushing cool blood out and cold dread in.
Even though I was made blind I knew it all,
Knew how they planned my end to be,
After counting six, a mental sigh, I surrendered,
To let the misery flow, circulate my mind, DISTRIBUTE,
My mind erupts any thoughts to ease this torture,
But my heart pets its hopes and mumbles its useless.
Sudden pain sprouts across my stomach, not a bolt but gab,
Nerves replenish by stinging liquid that runs to my toes.
Ropes seem to dangle from me and brush my knees,
Clearing my head to figure my state, then a gasp of shock.
I try to gag in disgust, regurgitate but sadly could not.
My soul takes penultimate refuge in my mind,
Fleeing this suffering, this public abuse to criminals.
Wrongfully judged, innocent, years left to flourish,
But no matter now, no matter, no matter I chant,
Drifts of wind skid across my back, I tightly smile,
And the cheers of the crowd gradually fade out.
My soul seeps out between my clenched teeth,
Dissolving into Mother Earth, cradled by freedom.
By: A.T.A (Toe)
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