Beautiful. Tragic. Intense. Awesome. My heart was hooked on this the minute I began reading it. That's what you want from a reader, you want them to get involved, feel what the people inside the story/poem etc. feel.
It's strange how the most haunting pieces can sometimes be the most beautiful and romantic but in a sadistic sense. I hope you understand what I mean. :/
My favourite line in the piece would have to be; "I forgive you.. But,
Fulfill your vow." I dunno it just strikes me as powerful.
Well done.
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