Hi birk, I found this to be an interesting piece so wanted to stop by and leave a review.
For a poem called "labyrinth" I almost wanted it to be harder to understand, like if any poem is allowed to be confusing and have stilted flow it is one called "labyrinth". You could almost do-away with all of the punctuation and then squish it more (less space between lines) in order to assist in that affect -- but that's just putting my opinion out there. It also would have been interesting to put this poem into like a spiral there are websites like this one that can do that --> https://www.festisite.com/text-layout/spiral/ .
Beyond formatting, I thought that the story was neat and the working in of the Minotaur was a good add too. The line I probably liked the most was "creating walls that weren't there" just that idea of creating your own problems while also being lost in a problem of your own fits really well with this almost contradictory idea of seeking death or seeking challenge expressed in the last line. I wished you had delved even more into some of the thoughts being expressed because although I can see how they're all related it felt like you listed like 7 ideas but didn't get to really explore any of them fully. For instance the idea of creating walls, or hearing voices, or finding darkness are all distinctly different (albeit related) problems and I think each one could have been hashed out in more than one line.
Overall, I think this poem has one of the most unique messages that I've read for a while. This idea of being your own enemy in your story and the metaphor of life being an internal labyrinth is intriguing. Thanks for sharing your poem. Please let me know if you have any questions about my review.
~alliyah
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