“Butter my butt in butter.”
Old lady McGable
told me one day,
on the massage table
where she lay.
Any other day I’d start the act,
and give her a splat.
But I can’t ignore the fact,
that she’s so damn fat.
I’ll give her a healthier choice
which will make her scream
in a gleeful rejoice.
And she’ll ask me before she accepts this dream;
“Butter my butt in ‘I can’t believe it’s not butter’?”
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My sister doesn't understand this poem for some reason, but I totally get it and I admire your creativity. Please keep writing poems!!!!!!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
I love the humor you've brought to the table. I'm not one to care for 'funny' poems, but this is kind of brilliant. I love how it's almost written as if from a long time ago, yet the concept itself is from this day and age. (If that makes sense to you.)
Aaaaanyways,
I loved it, and hope to see more like it in the (near) future.
Good Luck To You!
Hello, Birkhoff! Unknown391625 here with another review!
Ok, so. This is awesome. I think it is very hilarious and it was in the Literary spotlight for 16 likes?!?! That's amazing! Good job Birkhoff! Now, it rhymes for sure, awesome. You categorized the genres and the story, awesome. Same with the raring, awesome. Though, I would maybe take into consideration that you could rate it L or 12. Anyways, good job! I will read more poems by you. Don't give up and always write, Birkhoff!
-Unknown391625
Birkhoff...this was something...else.
You seem like the goofy type. Are you? Rhyming is very rare...so you can join me, or make a rhyming club! I used to enjoy writing, but now I like free verse better so don't count on me joining. I like this, though, and it was very good. Quest, weird, and just so you know those were compliments!
Byezeez,
Wisegirl22
this made me queasy.
same, which is why I love it
GENIUS XD