Im done with guys. I'm done. All they do is hurt me, leave, and tease me to the point it's never going to end. They diss me and make me cry, they anger me andI threaten to hurt them. I know my ways of getting back. But it doesn't always work.
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I'm sick of how they treat me like a toy, something that can be used anytime. I only exist when they need something from me. Unfortunately, I've had enough. I'm not giving them more chances. At all.
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Can't list how many times my heart's been shattered by 'em, whether simple crushes or just a regular friendship. I mean gosh, today is my one year anniversary with my boyfriend (2-11-15 through 2-11-16) and here my best guy friend judges me about that.
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Another one takes half an hour to two hours to text me back. I don't think he knows I just want to talk. He probably just pushes me out of his mind.
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A third tried to sabotage my relationship a couple months ago, "falling in love" with me and flirting nonstop. He did that for two months straight.
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A fourth used me and cheated on his girlfriend, both older than me. He used me when he actually wanted something from me to satiate his gross desires. He lied to me and manipulated me.
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A fifth hates me, outright. No matter what I say, he hates me and takes everything as insults and rude comments. He only wants to bring me down and ignores me all the time. Even when I ask a neutral question he doesn't answer, just laughs.
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A sixth uses me for homework. I do his homework for him, in exchange for favors. But its getting old. He's not learning everything, just tries to win me over with his grin and begging me to. I'm not good at saying no, cause I'm that girl who wants to please everyone.
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See why I'm done with guys?! I don't freaking care anymore, because obviously they do. It's just annoying that I have to put up with this each day at school. I'm tired of it. I'm tired of social media, drama, rumors, everything. Guys play fifty percent of it anyways, so.... I'm just done.
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Hey catty,
So I seems like your life is not going on that well. First your cat and now this. I'm sorry for all of it and I'm sorry that I cannot do anything to make it better and I'm sorry about the way your guy friends are treating you and I'm sorry that your cat died and I'm sorry because this may bring back the reasons you wrote ''oblivion". Please don't get me wrong I really am sorry.
I loved your poem. It's beautiful - I mean yes I'm sorry, but 'beautiful' was the first thing that hit my mind after reading you poem. It speaks of your anger and sorrow at the same time and I really like it. I like the flow of your poem too.
Never quit writing you are really good at it.
Fangirl~
.....thank you for this comment. a lot of bad happens here and there, I'm just stuck right now. Thank you for the compliment. It's my depression and low confidence/self esteem taking over again. It stinks. Happy writing though
I loved this, it showed your anger and sadness against people using you, don't be afraid to express yourself, you are a great writer and you need to show that to the people who cheat on you and use you and tell you you are wrong. But not all guys are bad, you need to show everyone that you are not going to take it anymore. That is what your story says in the words. I really like this part: (A third tried to sabotage my relationship a couple months ago, "falling in love" with me and flirting nonstop. He did that for two months straight.) this is exactly what happened to a boyfriend a couple of years ago.
And when you count from one to six shows how many times you where used and that you will never forget them for what they did to you. I also like this one:( A fifth hates me, outright. No matter what I say, he hates me and takes everything as insults and rude comments. He only wants to bring me down and ignores me all the time. Even when I ask a neutral question he doesn't answer, just laughs.) that shows your readers that if a friend hates you then he is not a good friend and has no right to know you. I have only one advice, try to make more words rhyme, if you ever read a poem you will see more of them have a few words that sound the same. Keep expressing your feelings and happy writing.
Thank you for the good feedback. I'm done with guys, not necessarily for dating and flirting, but in general. Too much conflict and hurt feelings.
I understand and I am sorry.
Hey Thesky here,
I get what you are saying some guys are big jerks but some just use peopel its the same with girls and boys lady or men they all just like to lie or use peopel for something. Everyone just needs someone to be nice for a change. I really liked this poem and how peopel can give out Their steaight feeling and not get judge.
Bye thesky out
People are annoying, guys in particular for me. Thanks for reviewing.