Try reading this fast if you dare. Tongue-twisting. Inspired by a topic my friend suggested.
This is a repetitive poem
It’s a poem that’s repetitive
Repeating my repetitiveness
In a repetitive poem
I like using repetition
I like writing poems
So I’ll be repetitive
And write a repetitive poem
Poems can be repetitive
Repetition can be a poem
Repeating repetitiveness repeatedly
In a poem in poetry that’s called a poem
Which is repetitive
Repetitive is this poem
This poem is repetitive
It’s repetition that’s repeated
In poetry of the use of a poem
Repeating poem repetitiveness
Is repetitive of a repetition
Repeated in a repeating, repetitive poem
Poetry is so repetitively repeated
Because a repetitive repeating repetitiveness repeated poem
Is repetitive.
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Oh Vex15, oh Vex15, oh Vex15!!
The poem was fun reading at first but then it became to ''repetitive''.
Probably you did want it to be that repetitively repetitive, but it did become a little annoying( actually a lot).
Anyways have fun writing more stuff. Maybe something that is not so repetitive.
Yo, Catlover211! cleverclogs here for a quick review!
This is hilarious. I love the repetitive repetition of repetitiveness. As I said in my post below, it reminds of me of Lady Redundant Woman from WordGirl (yes, I used to love that show; don't judge), a character who loved redundancy and repetitiveness. I also love how you also added some instances of Captain Obvious to add to the hilarity of this poem. For instance,
and
I don't know if it's intentional, but I love how these lines just state the obvious like that. It's one of my favorite kinds of humor. Of course, since this is a review, I have to offer some suggestions, so here's a few things.
Let's go back to the lines I just quoted.
As much as I love it, I'm not sure it's grammatically correct. Maybe you could substitute the second-to-last line for the title, so it looks like this:
You don't have to do it that way, but I'd recommend taking another look at that line anyway to make it better for the grammarz.
There was sort of a spot in the middle of the poem where it got a little too repeatedly repetitive to read, but in the end, I like how it just flowed from one redundancy to another, so I think it works fine (was that a run-on sentence or what?).
Overall, I really liked this poem. Just take a look at the little thing I pointed out, and it'll be good to go! Great job making me laugh. Keep up the awesome work!
Haha, it's a nice poem, and funny, but the problem is that it's TOO repetitive. I know that it's SUPPOSED to be like that, but somehow the over use of the word "repetitive" makes the poem lack flair. I don't know, maybe it's just me. But you could also tone it down, if you like.
Nice work. Keep writing!
Mysticalxx
Thanks for the review! Hope you liked it! Have a great day.
Hey, AJ dropping by.
I saw a lot of repetition. I would suggest less repetition. Less repetition would be better, so you shouldn't have so much repetition.
(OK, serious now)
I got a smile out of this poem! Humorous poems are right up my alley, so reading this was a breath of fresh air. My only suggestion would be more repetition.
Have a great day!
-AJ
Thanks!
I'm glad you liked this! It was extremely fun & easy to write in a few minutes, so I'll add more hopefully! Have a great night!
I think we all know who wrote this...
That's Lady Redundant Woman from WordGirl, if you didn't know. 
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My only advice is that this poem is rather repetitive. Perhaps you could consider re-wording some of it?
Hope you liked it! It's meant to be extremely annoying in a nice way, and yes, the use of repetition is on purpose. Have a great night!
I did enjoy it, it was a joke.