Young Writers Society

Ghostly Plane

There is a place suspended in a space
(or rather lack of space)
within this place.
It is a nothing (it has no mass)
but extends further than the universe.
Only there may a person go
and yet leave no absence behind.

I speak in riddles
for only in this tongue may comprehension dawn
and grow and bloom until it spawns
the answer (you don't know?)

Within this sphere (or could it be a cube?
Quite possibly and probably,
afterall our minds, they move in squares
and here we have a third dimension,
going unawares, but for myself.)

So, within this sphere (which I've asserted
is a cube)
there are no limits - no prevention - and its perverted
by our minds, which have affect (but no control)
and perhaps it is a minor defect
of the whole.

But the whole of - what -
could you be thinking;
all those cogs are turning
(squares and circles) in your mind.
It is the realm of course,
it is the place where we all fall,
where we unwind.

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A critique to the first person who can tell me what it is...

And all advice is much appreciated. I'm thinking currently that the beginning needs re-drafting a little? But I'm open to the opinions of others =)