Hey there! Just a comment balooza comment I'm leaving for ya!
This poem is so interesting - I felt like the vibe I was getting was sort of like reading an ancient parable that you are tasked with discerning meaning from. ! And your description of it in the lit center is super intriguing too - is it really based on a song you can't remember? I could see this poem being kind of neat to format into a spiral because of the "python eats the sun" end-line / theme and the snake image. It's a very mind-turny poem though right from the first image of a fully formed snake emerging from an egg.
The feeling I get from the poem is sort of "something is amiss in this world that is eternally looping around itself / eating itself".
Would love to know more about the inspiration behind it and what you would ID the theme as. The imagery all laces together so neatly and you do a good job of keeping it honed in on this one very compelling story.".
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