Hey Weymouth! Strange here on this fantastic Review Day and I have a review for you!
Okay, this had probably one of the biggest plot twists for a poem. Now, that must be crazy. How is it a plot twist? I started off thinking, "Okay, all the narrator is going to do is whine about how she lost him" and I wasn't impressed. I was actually thinking of a rant. That's when I found out the narrator found someone else to replace this certain someone, and it made me smile, and realized that this has a soft, cherry lime twist on it. Now, I dug deeper than I should have in the theme of the last stanza. See, she still loves him (And wants to say "I love you" when they say goodbye") but they can't be together. So, instead, she grabs another person who she loves, but still loves the first guy. It seems like the narrator just wants human affection, and just someone to be there for her. Basically, she just wants someone there for her. She had the "true love" but lost him. All that other "love", in retrospect, is just plain out baloney jabroni. She lost the only true person there for her. It's simple, but it's laid under non simple lines. I like that whole message put into that, and that what makes this poem work. Great job, Weymouth. You turned a simple idea into something better, barely breaking through the simple generic parts.
Overall, good job.
Strange gives you...
7.6/10
Good job,
Keep writing,
Stay groovy, my friend.
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