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Trapped In A Memory
Running, Running away from something, But I don't know what it is, It seems i'm running from nothing, But I can see it behinde me, As if it wants me ...
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Heaven
I wrote two versions of Heaven, please tell me which one you like better. Heaven 1 The way the angels took me there, The way they spoke, Their words their ...
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Goodbye
This is probably junk, but I wanted to know what you guys though of it. I walked along the ground, crushing the crinkled leaves that lay in my way. Thoughts ...
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Night Blanket
Blanket of stars in a midnight sky, Shooting stars and moons go by, Swirling colors and endless holes, Golden air and drifting souls, Many planets toss and turn, We still ...
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Life
Swirling wind, Chirping birds, Sounds indescribable for words, Sitting lakes, Rustling trees, Sweeter honey made from bees, Soft earth, Light air, More beautiful then a chestnut mare, Golden water, Fun ...
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I Can See
I can’t see your face, I can’t see your smile, I can’t see your feelings, But I can see your worth my while, I can’t see your light, I can’t ...
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Hourglass...oh my gosh read...
Can you please tell me in what order the Hourglass stories are sopposed to be in?????
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Just Us
The touch of your hand holds my mind in place has we float above the ground, tickling the clouds as we rise higher and higher, just us, together in the ...
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Needs title :-)
The Start of Things Miranda wasn’t surprised when the ghost that lived in her garage finally spoke to her, she had suspected it would ever since she figured out that ...
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No title (By me AND Sam)
Note: This was written by me and Sam; so beware. my thoughts spill on the paper like the words from your lips they fill the page with black.....I have nothing ...
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My Perception...
Orange fleaks of water drip down my bloody nose, touching the sky and holding the moon, Ripping jaguars slinking spots ...
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Hourglass
No offense, Sam, but this is the worst segmet so far. I mean its ok but its not my favorite. ...
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Twigs
Your long tangled hair with little peices of broken twigs sway through the wind, Your big goofy grin shines like ...
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Pale Moon, Chapter 1: Afina Senin
This is like the worst thing i've ever written and should be tossed out the window and eaten by verochious ...
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Needs Title! suggestions welcome!
The bright morning sun came down through the dew-coverd trees, reflecting off every single drop of water. My horse slowly ...
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The Iliad. Remake.
This is a script that one of my friends wrote, we are planning on acting this out and filming it. ...
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A graveyard of sorrow and joy (Kind of graphic)
The clouds are dark and the rain falls black as the crow sings a song of death my hope is ...
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I'm tired of that
This is a bunch of random ramblings, so feel free to tear it apart We were always friends and will ...
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HA HA HA HA (R for language)
This is just an emotional release but I kind of like it, so I thought I would post it, enjoy ...
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Question about LOTR
I don't know if this really belongs here but I just got The Lord Of The rings books and read ...
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HG
Sam, you are writing this in more like a poem then a story, its mostly just imagry and metaphors not actual story. Try adding more dialouge, remember you need to ...
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Cat-Scratched Eyes
I am writing this for a poetry contest so I really need good/harsh critque on it, thank you!! I am an ever changing metaphor living in a web of lies ...
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Cravokyo
Prologue This story starts in a time of no time and a place of nowhere, where the whole race of people are blobs of nothing and you can tell them ...
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Lord of The Rings or Harry Potter?
Personally I like Harry Potter better, I tried reading LOTR many times but only got so far, it just doesn't have the way to grasp me. But which do YOU ...
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I'll Find Yesterday
Enjoy todayPersue tomorrowCherish yesterday Grinning everyday behind your back, watching your soft ears turn bright pink, someone once compared you to a lump of red clay. Was it me? I ...
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A Chainlink Fence (working title)
"Close your eyes" "No, no, I don't want-" "Close your eyes it makes everything seem better" "But-" "Close your eyes, Sierra" "No...no..not now." Fire circled around me, large blue and ...
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Angelic
arched across the gallows pole the writing of my name, do not leave the ecstasy of what so long ago- Listen the pixies whisper words of warning to whoever wanders ...
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The Duck Writing Challenge 3/6
I should've known it was Daffy Duck all along, his diabolical grimace, his eyes full of hatred. I can't believe I didn't realize it. If I had I might have ...
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In The Forests of the Night
I absolutely LOVE this book, It's by Amelia Atwater-Rhodes and she wrote when she was 15. It's about a vampire troubling with her past. It is a small book so ...
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All the Forgotten Things
Authors Note: This is my first since poetry post since my return of a *cough* two year hiatus, so bear with me I love you so much it hurts my ...
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Without Reason pt.1
I walk through curtains of darkness, pushing them aside with the beacon that is my iPod's LED light. While trying to focus on muffling my footsteps in the fluffy carpet ...
