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A revisionMon Jun 04, 2007 6:25 am -

Late February, and the ground was still frozen. A few warm days flickered by, days we thought we co…Mon Jun 04, 2007 2:30 am -

shhhh... listen to the soft sway of oscillations lowering us back into dust a subtle reminder that …Sun Jun 03, 2007 10:38 pm -
It seems that here the world has never quite caught its breath or relinquished the relics of its pa…Sun Jun 03, 2007 8:52 pm -

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It's a bit of strange poem, and its not all in old English just parts. Critique away . The beauty o…Wed May 30, 2007 5:38 pm -

as i leave the smell of sound behind with the city, my marveled stars begin to grow cold and darkli…Sun May 27, 2007 6:12 pm -

yo guys check it outSun May 27, 2007 5:48 pm -

my view of whats happening to the worldSun May 27, 2007 5:43 pm -

Providentially, he was potentially, Enamoured by the glamour Of his near flawless stammer, Till the…Sun May 27, 2007 7:49 am -

The morning rises above Gabrielle's head with honor, while being dragged by time and off his chest.…Sun May 27, 2007 1:41 am -
We wish to acquit ourselves of purpose, and tumble off the verge in teardrops; cascading over silve…Sat May 26, 2007 2:17 am -

written for Sashlash Stormsinger, my alter ego, Master of the Waters and Emperor Over a Thousand Se…Sat May 26, 2007 12:23 am -

Have you seen the way she stares into his eyes while he's looking in the other direction, or the ti…Sat May 26, 2007 12:11 am -

(for lack of a better title)Fri May 25, 2007 10:22 pm -

S(p)liced thighs form his bedspread these days. He teaches her independence in self-consummation - …Fri May 25, 2007 10:13 pm -

Needless to say, this is about someone I loveFri May 25, 2007 1:28 am -

The desert surrounds me, Stretching to every horizon, Cracked and dry with age, Flat and featureles…Thu May 24, 2007 8:42 pm -

A Slam Poem...Thu May 24, 2007 2:35 pm -

Wow. I think this is your best yet. It's long, but it develops, and so subtly, and delicately... it…Thu May 24, 2007 2:13 pm -

Sometimes you have to be brave, and let things fall where they will. It's not yours to decide how t…Thu May 24, 2007 1:22 pm -

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Moments flickers past, hands reach up to catch, Through the fingers, like grains of sand, Time flas…Thu May 24, 2007 4:45 am -
I love you, Benji, but you can be an idiot sometimes.Wed May 23, 2007 9:59 am -
A deep poem about taking the leap and being our true selves.Wed May 23, 2007 5:30 am -

she's punching me with facts she poisoned me with sarcasm can't look away from it either, believe m…Tue May 22, 2007 11:46 pm -

Black box, jack box, lend me your ear; and I'll keep twirlin' despite my fear. Dark box, stark box,…Tue May 22, 2007 1:47 pm -

To be perfectly honest with you, this was not one of my favorites of your collection. It seemed muc…Sun May 20, 2007 11:04 pm -

I applied for a new passport today. Took my photo at the booth. Snap. Poker face. I remember the la…Sun May 20, 2007 4:09 pm -

Just a poem. Please read if you can!Sat May 19, 2007 11:26 pm -

These blackened skies wrought by blackened hearts... The cloud of debris hangs over like a spirit W…Sat May 19, 2007 9:30 pm -

She looked at me dissapointed, and she doesn't want to talk. She said that this is our last moment …Sat May 19, 2007 9:20 pm -

Standing out in the rain. Look up to the sky. Rain falls onto my face. Blood dripping off my hands.…Sat May 19, 2007 6:26 pm -

Inspired by William Carlos Williams' "The Red WheelbarrSat May 19, 2007 3:13 pm -

Didn't know if this was Dramatic or Narrative.Sat May 19, 2007 2:26 pm -
MESSAGE FROM MIDNIGHT...SORRY I ACCIDENTALLY DELETED THE FIRST POST (WITH THE POEM SO GO DOWN TO MY…Fri May 18, 2007 11:35 pm -
The silence is a room you’ve moved into, with jaundiced wallpaper and iron cast windows that don’t …Fri May 18, 2007 8:38 pm -

I trudge the sludge of finite life whence ether was adorned; with both fudge and grudge in sight of…Fri May 18, 2007 8:05 am -

Arson A spark of sickly glowing light, Catches my eye amid the night. My breathing stops, and then …Wed May 16, 2007 12:33 am -

I like this poem too much. Do your worst, if so inclined. our familiar lady. Death walks New York s…Sun May 13, 2007 10:15 pm -
Quiet Obsession Kyle Pate For Lauren Mannis The bridges we cross the roads we take. The cliché name…Sun May 13, 2007 5:39 pm -

the one which we can never win...Sat May 12, 2007 2:36 am -

[b]All the Rhythms[/b] I lost myself in that moment Or maybe, Maybe I found myself. Chaos is a funn…Sat May 12, 2007 2:28 am -

A hand-shake, “Hi, I’m Charlie” And it begins. Now as friends we Can share all rumour, tales and Fu…Fri May 11, 2007 8:44 pm -
n/aThu May 10, 2007 11:17 pm -

First poem so please review itWed May 09, 2007 8:49 pm -

Ok well, yeah...Just reply to this so I can know how much it sucks. Thanks. I've been in darkness m…Wed May 09, 2007 4:48 pm -

You crawl through the back door and knock on the side of my cell phone. I wake in the hive of morni…Tue May 08, 2007 8:44 pm -

a poem on the superstition of 3 amTue May 08, 2007 4:59 am -

a random poem on my teachers please read and reveiwSun May 06, 2007 7:28 pm
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