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Part 1: FreedomTue Sep 29, 2009 8:00 pm -
OK, I'm sorry that I split the first chapter into 2. I don't write a lot at once. Sorry. Anyway, if…Sun Sep 27, 2009 10:22 am -
Hey. I really need your opinions and reviews to improve this piece from here. The main thing i am w…Sun Sep 27, 2009 12:26 am -
“I think she's coming around.” I heard someone whisper. “Is she alright?” another one asked. “She d…Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:35 pm -
The sun seems to be hiding today, again. It's the spring in Seattle. The rain pours on my face as I…Thu Sep 24, 2009 10:10 pm -
this is my first story i've posted so i hope you all will like it! ANY reviews will be much appreci…Thu Sep 24, 2009 8:19 pm -
Before I begin- or, rather, you begin- I want to mention that for some reason this chapter was a pa…Thu Sep 24, 2009 12:09 pm -
SOME LANGUAGE AND VIOLENCE. Note made on December 9th- When Priest Athelos of Eyam village found hi…Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:25 am -
Sorry for change of perspective. I just felt like writing from another point of view. So, if anyone…Wed Sep 23, 2009 10:53 am -
Hey. A few questions to focus on (please :wink: ): 1)What does the halo near the beginning represen…Wed Sep 23, 2009 10:27 am -
It was a hot evening. The air was warm where they were, cramped up within the trees of this elabora…Wed Sep 23, 2009 2:28 am -
This is the last of the currently written chapters I'll be posting. As soon as I can, I'll get up t…Tue Sep 22, 2009 5:50 am -
SOME LANGUAGE AND VIOLENCE. Oh, and the format transferred a little funky. *shrug* Note made on Dec…Mon Sep 21, 2009 11:49 pm
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The fireplace in the inn flickered with a small flame. It crackled, emitting the potent whiff of bu…Mon Sep 21, 2009 4:14 pm -
This is the second chapter to...the first chapter...haha. I would appreciate any and all reviews, s…Mon Sep 21, 2009 8:18 am -
Hello. :) Thanks for deciding to click on my story. I don't know if you can tell my the title or no…Sun Sep 20, 2009 11:42 pm -
Hey, well, please please please review. I really need to know if this is worth working with or not.…Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:39 am -
Hey there everyone. I've decided to continue with this, and I really need all reviews badly. Even i…Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:06 am -
Hey guys! Part two time, lets see how this goes. Please be honest, even brutally if need be. I need…Fri Sep 18, 2009 6:53 pm -
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Locked Halfbreed Chapter OneUnwantedFri Sep 18, 2009 4:19 pm -
Stupid computer crashed and I lost all my data. I had to start over again. Darned technology... grr…Thu Sep 17, 2009 1:44 am -
This is a story I've been working on:) hope you enjoy. It's a fantasy/love. In a world where corrup…Tue Sep 15, 2009 8:12 am -
**This is my first ever post here on YWS. Please tell me what you think, and be as brutal as you ne…Tue Sep 15, 2009 7:40 am -
Wow, right? It's been about a year and a half since I wrote the first chapter for this story, and n…Tue Sep 15, 2009 3:40 am -
Hey:) Some of you might have read this before because i posted this when there were no corrections.…Mon Sep 14, 2009 5:28 am -
Just so you know, I wrote like five chapters of this in one day, so it's probably pretty bad. Pleas…Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:20 pm -
here's part d of arolands leper Cicerin fitted a golden fletched arrow to his Triddian yew bow. He …Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:04 pm -
An insert from Mae Feller’s diary 13th of August, 1681 Father watched me closely today. More closel…Sat Sep 12, 2009 3:40 pm -
It's been so long since I've written anything, I'm feeling a little rusty :oops: So just let me kno…Sat Sep 12, 2009 4:25 am -
Someone tapped on the door of the cave. "Come in," Said Tarina. She looked up. Their, standing righ…Fri Sep 11, 2009 6:14 am -
*** Please read 1 first! Thanks for all the comments - they've been really helpful. By the way, the…Wed Sep 09, 2009 11:25 pm -
The death of her best friend opens a door to the otherworld.Wed Sep 09, 2009 6:17 pm -
Okay, so, thanks to the people who commented on my first draft I really appreciated it! This is my …Tue Sep 08, 2009 10:07 pm -
Here's the next part to my story. Hope you like it! Please Crit. (oh, and keep in mind that this wa…Tue Sep 08, 2009 4:14 pm -
Binding Darkness 1 The wind howled loudly through the silhouette trees. Through the midnight fog, I…Tue Sep 08, 2009 3:21 pm -
Return She first appeared to me when I was nine. I was dreaming I was wandering in the middle of a …Sun Sep 06, 2009 11:19 pm -
Fantasy-scifiSun Sep 06, 2009 5:36 pm -
Here's the ninth chapter, which I'm sure all who read the cliffhanger chapter eight ended on are aw…Sun Sep 06, 2009 4:54 am -
here is part c enjoy and please crit I wonder where tose Bandits be off to. Bad idea it was to camp…Sat Sep 05, 2009 9:26 pm -
You've looked correctly--there are no parts to this one, because it's the first chapter short enoug…Sat Sep 05, 2009 6:34 pm -
Hey guys, this is the first chapter of my first novel. It wod be great if you could give me some ti…Sat Sep 05, 2009 11:30 am
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I really like this idea-- imaginary friends that personify themselves to help him work through his …Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:03 pm -
Still no name, I think I've made all necessary changes now?Wed Sep 02, 2009 4:46 pm -
please read and reveiw!!!Mon Aug 31, 2009 5:10 pm -
Another chapter in two partsMon Aug 31, 2009 3:36 am -
This is my first story. There is violence and SOME language.Thu Aug 27, 2009 8:35 pm -
Welcome to the second part! This one isn't really violent. It's more getting to know the character …Thu Aug 27, 2009 8:34 pm -
Chapter One He could almost taste the air, thick with the festival’s smells; cooking meat and the s…Thu Aug 27, 2009 6:06 am -
VELDRIN By MalxFu Productions She leaned against the large trunk of an old oak, hiding in the shade…Tue Aug 25, 2009 2:18 pm
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