The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (Chapter 7-1)

by ulala8

Published June 21, 2014

12+ Violence

In The Tales of the Argonauts: the Osorezu and the Hana

Chapter 7: Kai and the Breath of the Gods

The Past

Hiro was an average farm boy. He knew no privilege, and he knew no luxury— and yet, he was happy. He was content to live among the cows and the chickens and the pigs. The sun brought him joy and warmed his heart as he plowed the fields. He enjoyed to see his success at the end of the autumn with his apples and his pumpkins.

There was not a thread of evil in him. From the hairs on his head to the tips of his toes, he was good. All recognized that he was good. Even the animals never acted up around him. If there was a storm, the horses wouldn't rear and threaten to hurt him. The cows and bulls would never charge him. The chickens would never chase him. All knew that he was good.

He tended toward the baby animals as well. Even though he was a human, and animals protected their babies from them, such creatures didn't mind him. They freely allowed their chicks and their piglets and their foals and their calves be handled by this human. It was even more impressive that the wild animals would allow him to handle their babies. He was an impressive person, especially to the gods.

One god, in particular, loved him just as all creatures on earth did. This god was Lano, the god of bravery. He enjoyed watching the tranquil essence of this man as he enjoyed his days.

However, Hiro's peace was destroyed. In these moments, the gods made a fate changing decision.

In the night, a band of ruffians ransacked his barn, slew two chickens, stole a live hen and rooster, took enough horses for their party of four and began to storm off, ripping the farm up in their wake.

Hiro awoke in the midst of their raid, to the clatter of his pots and pans falling. He took a kitten candle and slowly shuffled out into the kitchen. He thought that the noise was perhaps a stray animal that had discovered food in his home. However, he rounded the corner to the kitchen and was met by a knife in his belly. He collapsed, mouth gaping. Blood fell from him like a spring.

The men muttered a few things to each other before they turned and began to leave.

Then the kitchen was consumed in a bright white light, and the voice of Lano was heard, "May my soul pour into this man and make him a Hero."

As this was said, the kind Hiro stood. Despite his wound, he stood. Despite the menacing adversary, he stood. He stood with his eyes glowing bright as well as every oraface elsewhere. The light poured from him in a manner that could only be described as godly.

He then approached the ruffians and gently touched each of the forehead with his middle finger. With each touch, the men collapsed in lifeless heaps. The light of the god had passed into each and it had overwhelmed their sinning souls. With the last man, the light left Hiro and he was healed.

When the morning came, he recounted his night to the village elder— not in the hopes of documenting his experience, but to receive a little extra money to account for the damage. Of course, he expected to work for this money. He'd rather ask for the money from the city than exploit his animals solely to gain back a hen, rooster, two chickens, and four horses. However, when he told the story, the elder was taken aback.

"You were dying, then you awoke and the intruders were dead, but their bodies were glowing?"

"Yes sir," replied Hiro, "and they turned to ash by the morning."

The elder gestured for Hiro to stay put before he conferred with the medicine man. After many moments, both men returned to Hiro's presence.

"Last night, I have hypothesized," said the medicine man, "you were enlightened by Lano."

"That is to say that we would like you as our spiritual guide, as Lano would want. In return, we'll supply you with every animal and every worker and every deciple that you would want..."

It was from this day forth that any person whom was touched in such a way by a god or goddess was made a Guide. This Guide would become the leader of the people through their divine protector.

Comments & reviews · 2
ConfusedGlasses wrote a review Review · Jun 29, 2014

Hey! I'm back for a review!
So this chapter sort of seems like a completely different story from chapter 8. I like it. This gives us more insight to the world that this story is set in and also the belief system of the people. I have to say that your writing style is something I envy. It all sounds so natural.

But, there is one thing I'm going to complain about.
The medicine man seems to have hypothesized out of the blue. Maybe you could elaborate that.
Or maybe that's just me.

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Deanie wrote a review Review · Jun 23, 2014

Hey Ulala!

I don't really have much to say here, seeing as this was a pretty perfect chapter on its own. Again, this was a very nice explaining chapter that shows us how the Guide's were brought to their world. I am expecting some to pop up in the future chapters as well, seeing as they have just been explained. At first I though Hiro was going to be the god of animals, but sometimes it's good to do something a little unexpected and different. This was perfectly written and well, what can I say to improve it?

This may not have to do with this chapter in particular, but it has come to mind as I have been reading... although you do a good job of connecting the past and present at most times because you explain something in the past and then bring it in in the present, I am wondering how all these characters are going to connect. I have mentioned that you have an abundance of them in my previous review, but I hope soon we're going to see all these separate storylines connecting and twisting together someway, otherwise I feel like we're reading a lot of disjointed stories and that we don't get an essence of much importance from any of them. So make sure you connect the dots at some point soon, yes?

He tended toward the baby animals as well.


I think you mean 'to' instead of 'toward' here.

Also, I wanted to know what a Guide did exactly. Yes they guide spiritually, but is this just in prayer and worship? Or do they get to advise higher beings, whatever is equivalent to a King or Emperor here saying this is what the Gods want them to do? Or does being a Guide mean you are the equivalent to a King or Emperor in this world? You've left me interested in this new creation but I am still unsure as to what they do. Go into a bit more depth and explain this.

One more part and then I am all caught up! I am going to bunk off and review it soon :3

Deanie x

ulala8 replied · Jun 23, 2014

The storyline will connect shortly. The chapter I'm working on now does not have a "past" half, and neither will any thereafter.
As for the Guides, we find out their significance through the story.



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