Hello ellasnotebook! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!Give me your soul.
With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overallStrikethrough = remove
Underline = krazy Kara komments.
My interpretation:
so you're "losing your mind" and white noise is the only thing keeping your sanity from leaving you? ooooooo
Overall:
I loved this. It very much deserves its like keep up the great work!
Why haven’t you given me your soul yet? --
Kara
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