Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review!
(The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If I offend you I apologize in advance.(I will try to be humorous.)
"you were painted by a crook, too,
but, oh well." This as far as I could see was the only problem I found. There shouldn't be a comma after 'crook' and 'but'.
From what I can see you don't have any more grammar and/or comma mistakes. Keep up the writing, have a good day.
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