Hello ellasnotebook! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!Give me your soul.
With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overallStrikethrough = remove
Underline = krazy Kara komments.
My interpretation:
um... is this just about a statue or is there something more to it? If there is, I can't see it because it's so subtle. That can go either way good or bad.
Overall:
This isn't the strongest of your poems. Then again, this is one of your first ones, so that would make sense keep up the great work!
Why haven’t you given me your soul yet? --
Kara
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