Hello ellasnotebook! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!Give me your soul.
With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overallStrikethrough = remove
Underline = krazy Kara komments.
My interpretation:
honestly? I don't really know what this is about. It has so many elements inside of it that I believe that there is no true answer to that question.
Overall:
I really loved it. Short and sweet. I think that this is one of your stronger poetry. Keep up the great work!
Why haven’t you given me your soul yet? --
Kara
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