Hello, anshira.
I like this poem. I love the rhyme and the wording in the poem.
My favorite lines are
But when it sinks- out comes the moon,
The light is dimming, it'll probably be soon.
I don't know why, I just love that part.
Anyways, I see no errors in this poem that I know of.
Keep up the good work! ~
- K
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