Hi anshira! Griff, here for an extremely short review!
Wow. I really enjoyed this poem. It is written in a nice way and format, a conversational tone. I really liked the line,
Thus I knew I was playing with fire.
It reminds me of the quote "Fight fire with fire." I enjoyed it. I also loved how the main character admitted their wrongs as well as stated the partner's.
Overall, I enjoyed this poem, although I do think it could have had a bigger ending, something that made you gasp. I felt it fizzled off, just a bit, but that's just me. Everything else is fantastic. Nice job.
Keep writing and being amazing! Go Beasts!
~GC
Points: 11196
Reviews: 254
Donate