Hi Queenie,
Delirium Nervosa here to leave a review on your work.
I was completely enraptured when reading your poem! The way you have intertwined the stanzas and continued rhythm and rhyme scheme was highly commendable! I personally resonated strongly with this poem and I loved how you used repetition to reinforce the intensity and weight associated with an angels tears.
I have nothing but praise for this amazing piece of poetry! I really loved reading this and couldn't stop! The vocabulary is perfectly matched to the topic and the intimate yet important concept you have written about.
Well done! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
-Delirium Nervosa
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