Goodbye!
I was writing with glee
When my clock reminded me
That the day's almost done,
And my bed awaits me.
So adieu I must bid
To my fellow writer friends,
And crawl under the covers
For a much needed rest.
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Omg I loved this. I have the attention span of a goldfish so a nice short poem is always appreciated. Loved the rhymes and relatability.
Thank you!
This is a really short poem so it's not like I can find much to critique lol but yeah, basically what the other reviewer said. It's a cute poem and I like the word Adieu so that makes me instantly appreciate it.
I love the flexibility of poetry though, how one poem can be about this deep-dark-thought-provoking-things and then we have poems like this. They both are equally nice to read though and sometimes it's good to read a poem that's more simple and sweet like this one
I would have no idea where to add critique in this, I feel like if you changed anything then the poem would lose it's simplistic feel I guess ? I don't know, anyway, speaking of sleep actually I could use that
Hey CreativeUsername!
Thanks for reviewing! Sleep well
Hey, Zekcede here!
Thsis is really cute!
I like that its really short and simple but also has a pretty meaningful(?) background. I also really like the rhyme scheme in the first four lines, so... yea! I also really like the general style of writing, its really appealing. I was also wondering, could expand a bit on the narrator? because then we will have a bit of background fro the context of the poem.
Keep writing, you're doing great!
-Z
(sorry for double posting)
Honestly, I wrote this when I was leaving a WriterFeedPad last night...that's the context. I posted it 'cause I think it turned out pretty well for something that I wrote in around five minutes.
Thanks for reviewing!
Hey, Zekcede here!
Thsis is really cute!
I like that its really short and simple but also has a pretty meaningful(?) background. I also really like the rhyme scheme in the first four lines, so... yea! I also really like the general style of writing, its really appealing. I was also wondering, could expand a bit on the narrator? because then we will have a bit of background fro the context of the poem.
Keep writing, you're doing great!
-Z