Hi! This is nightshadows bring a new comment live to a theater near you! Ok, so enough of my uniqueness here are my thoughts:
Oh my gosh I love your poems! As a kid my family wouldn't have a cookie jar but something similar. (probably because if we had a cookie jar I would take all the cookies and my brothers and I would go into a hunger games situation). But I think this story was so cute! Especially the end where you finish with happy memories with the family. It makes me fell a happy soft gentle warmness inside and I think it is so nice! Please keep writing more of your amazing poems! Great job!
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