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I didn't quite understand this poem, because it seems to me like it is a bunch of gibberish. No offense. I'd re-write this, unless that is what you were intending.
Wow I liked it but the begin kinda confused me a little bit.
I like this! Although I'll admit I don't entirely understand the message, this poem still proves to be quite thought-provoking. I feel a lot of reversal going on, providing a nice contrast from the title. It flowed very well, and the rhymes just worked. I want to read some of your other work!