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I love it. Thinking about it, it does feel like I was a todler just yesterday. Time flys when you're having fun! Keep writing!
This is amazing! It makes me think back to all those times. It really flowed as I read it; nothing seemed out the ordinary. Everything fit in! I think (and this is just me trying to come up with something to say about what to improve) you could add in older experiences as well. Maybe like graduation and other stuff like that. Of course, I'm not sure how old you are... You had toddler, then around middle school, and then it felt like you needed high school or something. Well, continue writing!
xP Well spoken.
This is amazing! It makes me think back to all those times. It really flowed as I read it; nothing seemed out the ordinary. Everything fit in! I think (and this is just me trying to come up with something to say about what to improve) you could add in older experiences as well. Maybe like graduation and other stuff like that. Of course, I'm not sure how old you are... You had toddler, then around middle school, and then it felt like you needed high school or something. Well, continue writing!