all of me squeezed out in pieces

I LOVE THIS its one of those written pieces that makes u think and i rarely have that so u did great keep it up from - cliche reviewer

Hi there, I am here to review!

I am fascinated by the way the poem is formatted. I like how the word going is in a different spot from the rest of the words. I also really like the roman numerals to start off each verse. It gives it a very, divine-like feeling. To me, this might sound weird, but it sounds as though it was an angel that had gotten lost along the way and wants to find their way back to who they were and their old life. That sounds silly but that's what I thought of the first time I read this poem.

I can feel the emotions of confusion, despair, and hopelessness throughout this work, and all I want to do is protect the muse and help them feel better and find their way back to how they were.

Overall this is beautiful and I think I am going to go binge-read the rest of your works. Thank you for creating this, have a great day.

I loved it! This piece of poetry is pretty amazing. You put all your emotion and feelings, and knew how to express it in the best and clearest way. I could feel in every sentence what you wanted to say. It is just amazing the way you joked with the ``going`` over this. Keep on it, you are a really good writer

This is a very emotive piece of poetry, and that certainly comes through in your writing. I love the layout of your poem, especially the "I am still going" phrases, as when I read them I feel like I am holding my breath as there is tension created for what is going to happen next for the character, as it is clear that the pace changes throughout various parts of the writing which I really like as it creates a sense of mystery.

Keep on writing I would love to read some more pieces from you