Nice poem and kinda true. With the term "I love you" as an over used term it seems almost empty any way
I cant find any misspeling. And it kinda shows how hard it is to confess to a crush. Any way o’er is very clever in writing so props for that : )
"they both hold sway
o’er human hears"
so this feels odd to read because of the fact that it really isnt worded right. (Mabey its a poetry thing I dont know) anyway good job and keep writing : D
Points: 40
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