daddy's girl

Hello hello!
Raindrop here!
Here for a short review.
I honestly think of not adding anything bad about this art even if I am sure I will find something.The punctuation is one of these things but It does not bother me ( atleast me well).Overall this is amazing and I am really sorry this is short review but your writing style is amazing and the whole art was short so I had no other way to write this review.It shows the pure love of a small girl which is shown toward her beloved dad.Dads not always show their love because they think they need to be 'the man'and not be lovely dovely showing love acting sweetly but honestly this is what little girls love though!If you could put capital letters it could be fine.

Good job!

This poem is really so sweet ,i loved it .Your writing style is unique,just that use capital alphabets for the beginning letters which will emboss the beauty of your poem.You have drained your emotions in this piece of art which is very touchy.Hope to see more and more of your work around.I am new to this site and your poem touched me.Thanks for writing.Its displays one of the best relation in the world which is of the father and his daughter.Keep writing.Hope my review was of use to you.Sorry for a short one
Urvika

Hi!!!

*claps* amazing work! its really sweet, or maybe bitter sweet would be a better word. It was a short but certainly a good one. the only thing that i would suggest to you is capitalize the 'I's and the words at the begining of the sentences. otherwise it was a really good work. and you have no other grammatical or spelling mistakes.
so yeah I hope to see more of your works around here... untill then keep up the good work.

Fangirl~

I really liked this poem. It's just excellent. It shows your love for your daddy but at the same time it shows your disappointment by his harsh behavior. Daddies are just love. They are heroes. To give you comfort they can go to any extent. But sometimes they can get upset and when we try to talk to them they really talk to loud. You have really put emotions in this poem very efficiently.

But I have also noticed some mistakes in this little piece of work.
The use of word "i". Whenever you use it, it should be in its capital form not in its small form.

Secondly, when you introduce a line in a poem it should start with a capital letter not with the small one.

But I really liked the last two lines of your poem, they are really heart touching.
Anyways you did it very nicely. Have a good upcoming time and keep writing

Mahvash.

This was a very nice poem. It flows well and I think many people can relate to it. When I read your poem, I could feel your emotion. It was beautiful. You describe the scene, problem,and situation very well.
I feel like you should write a longer version of this poem, it was amazing and I think it would be better if it was maybe a bit longer. What you said at thew end, it really spoke to me "No, sweetheart, Daddy has to fix himself"
As for things you could do better,you should go through and make sure that the letter I is capital, I saw several places where it wasn't it doesn't really affect the poem but, it is always good to make sure you type things properly.

Hi!
I really like your poem. It was short but really put your point across. I found that many people could relate to this. I like the layout and the concept of it is very good. It really shows children's innocence, which I love.

Hey there Meandbooks!!

Here I am to review your fresh and wonderful piece of short poetry!!

This is very beautifully written, and I liked the idea of the story. The theme was little emotional, and it had a great meaning. I loved it. The poem flows well. I like the style of writing. It is easy to understand, and it seems how casually and easily you write and the letters glide on the people so beautifully and each one to express someting.

I like the final answer:

"No, sweetheart, Daddy has to fix himself."

This is really innocent. I like this lovely piece of poem, and I hope to read more.
Keep writing...
Never cease...
Have a nice day!