Hello and Happy Review Day! Here to give what I think will be my last review this review day! <3
**disclaimer: I will most likely focus on negative aspects more so than positive aspects when reviewing, and this is just to help you grow as a writer! It is totally okay not to agree with something I say! Also, If I repeat anything already said, it's probably because it needs to be changed!**
wow, I don't have much to say about this honestly, I thought it was set up really good and you have a smooth writing style. Also, I've seen the name "Maeve" in another story recently, which is odd considering I've never heard that name before in my life xD
I will say I'm a bit confused by the tree. Is it literally grabbing things?? As in magically? and did it grow that big overnight? I might be missing something there but it just kind of confused me xD
I don't know what else to say honestly, again, there wasn't much wrong with this. There also wasn't a lot to this part either, but that's okay.
I hope I helped in some way xD
- Del <3
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