Sugoi- means awesome in Japanese.( I think you already know that) That is some great piece of art! Yeah, it is an art.... You write great lyrics. The intro gives the reader a touch which just seizes him to read the rest of the lyric. I really loved the intro. The chorus is great, too. I just wanna read it over and over again. The second verse is very realistic. The ending is great also.
But there is something that I didn't quite get.
"She knows you're there, she knows you're wrong
She misses home, it's been so long
Since she felt safe"
Here, I think that the first line doesn't quite match with the next two lines. I mean, these three lines sound to me 'unflowing' or 'not working'. But all other words in other lines just seem to mix with each other so well and create such a great flow that I get hypnotized. But, this one didn't really catch this flow or so I think.
Well, since this is your work, you know better how your words and lines should flow. Overall, I really enjoyed the song.
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