So my best friend and I were talking (as we do,) and I realized how many funny chats we have. I started saving them to a word doc for memories. AND THEN, I was reading a book which was chats between people and I went 'Hey, Bella and I have those!' and so this is what came out of it. I'm not sure if I'll continue, even though, heaven knows we have enough. It is rather crazy, I admit, but they're funny to us. :D
The Digital Life Of Best Friends-
The Sprockets (aka best friends) are discussing how they should take videos of them being crazy. And this is what happens. (These are real chats that Bella and I (my best friend) have had. I’m Elizabeth and she’s Nicole. ) :)
Elizabeth-
ME TOO
one day we're going to do that again
take videos of us being insane
and NEVER delete them
Nicole-
you make me laugh so hard
SO HARD
never
Elizabeth-
:D
Nicole-
ever
no matter how ashamed of ourselves we are
Elizabeth-
that's my job, silly goose
I make you laugh, you make me laugh
:333
we'll calm down each other's ruffled feathers
Nicole-
YUPP
Elizabeth-
MWHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAH
YOU’RE THE BREAD TO MY JAM
I'm the ink to your paper
I'm the nutella to your crackers
Nicole-
you’re the bread to my butter
not jam
NUTELLA
Elizabeth-
FINE
Nicole-
I WANT TO BE NUTELLA
Elizabeth-
FINE
Nicole-
you can be jelly
WOULDN'T THAT BE NATY
Elizabeth-
you’re the peanut butter to my spoon
Nicole-
nasty
Elizabeth-
xD
Nicole-
XD
Elizabeth-
YOU ARE THE CHOCOLATE TO MY BROWNIE
Nicole-
I AM LIKE BUCKLED OVER
Elizabeth-
so am I!
Nicole-
<3 THATS THE BEST COMPLIMENT I’VE EVER GOTTEN
Elizabeth-
OH MY GOD
I’m going to die
Nicole-
why?
Elizabeth-
I'm laughing so hard
OMG
Nicole-
I know right
Elizabeth-
YOURE THE POD TO MY i
Nicole-
OMG
YUSS
thats awesome
OMG
Elizabeth-
I AM THE PICKLE TO YOUR CHIP
Nicole-
ITS 12:30
Elizabeth-
what?
yep
xD
Nicole-
I GET TO BE THE PICKLE
Elizabeth-
I said I was going to bed 10 minutes ago
YES YOU DO <3
Nicole-
i have to go to bed.
HAHAHHAA
Elizabeth-
I’M THE RAW TO YOUR POTATO
Nicole-
YUS
OMG YUSS
Elizabeth-
since you eat raw potatoes
Nicole-
UH HUH
Elizabeth-
and other raw things
ANYWAY
night night darling sprocket
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Hi, Sparkle! I'm Lumi, and I'm going to be reviewing what is clearly a poem placed in the wrong section. Tsk tsk on you, ma'am. Tsk tsk indeed.
First off, I'll start with what I liked:
These are all delicious items, and are highly potent for your metaphor of friendship, which is clearly that you can find all the ingredients for a friend at the grocery store, if only you pair them in the right order.
Now, I have to chastise you for your lack of imagery. There are no ponies or waterfalls in this poem at all, and I think it's disgraceful. For that, I suggest you completely rewrite this 'friendship' and start over with a fresh trip to the grocery store.
-Lumi