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The Digital Lives of Best Friends- Entry 1

by LadySpark


So my best friend and I were talking (as we do,) and I realized how many funny chats we have. I started saving them to a word doc for memories. AND THEN, I was reading a book which was chats between people and I went 'Hey, Bella and I have those!' and so this is what came out of it. I'm not sure if I'll continue, even though, heaven knows we have enough. It is rather crazy, I admit, but they're funny to us. :D

The Digital Life Of Best Friends-

The Sprockets (aka best friends) are discussing how they should take videos of them being crazy. And this is what happens. (These are real chats that Bella and I (my best friend) have had. I’m Elizabeth and she’s Nicole. ) :)

Elizabeth-

ME TOO

one day we're going to do that again

take videos of us being insane

and NEVER delete them

Nicole-

you make me laugh so hard

SO HARD

never

Elizabeth-

:D

Nicole-

ever

no matter how ashamed of ourselves we are

Elizabeth-

that's my job, silly goose

I make you laugh, you make me laugh

:333

we'll calm down each other's ruffled feathers

Nicole-

YUPP

Elizabeth-

MWHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAH

YOU’RE THE BREAD TO MY JAM

I'm the ink to your paper

I'm the nutella to your crackers

Nicole-

you’re the bread to my butter

not jam

NUTELLA

Elizabeth-

FINE

Nicole-

I WANT TO BE NUTELLA

Elizabeth-

FINE

Nicole-

you can be jelly

WOULDN'T THAT BE NATY

Elizabeth-

you’re the peanut butter to my spoon

Nicole-

nasty

Elizabeth-

xD

Nicole-

XD

Elizabeth-

YOU ARE THE CHOCOLATE TO MY BROWNIE

Nicole-

I AM LIKE BUCKLED OVER

Elizabeth-

so am I!

Nicole-

<3 THATS THE BEST COMPLIMENT I’VE EVER GOTTEN

Elizabeth-

OH MY GOD

I’m going to die

Nicole-

why?

Elizabeth-

I'm laughing so hard

OMG

Nicole-

I know right

Elizabeth-

YOURE THE POD TO MY i

Nicole-

OMG

YUSS

thats awesome

OMG

Elizabeth-

I AM THE PICKLE TO YOUR CHIP

Nicole-

ITS 12:30

Elizabeth-

what?

yep

xD

Nicole-

I GET TO BE THE PICKLE

Elizabeth-

I said I was going to bed 10 minutes ago

YES YOU DO <3

Nicole-

i have to go to bed.

HAHAHHAA

Elizabeth-

I’M THE RAW TO YOUR POTATO

Nicole-

YUS

OMG YUSS

Elizabeth-

since you eat raw potatoes

Nicole-

UH HUH

Elizabeth-

and other raw things

ANYWAY

night night darling sprocket


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Hi, Sparkle! I'm Lumi, and I'm going to be reviewing what is clearly a poem placed in the wrong section. Tsk tsk on you, ma'am. Tsk tsk indeed.

First off, I'll start with what I liked:

NUTELLA

peanut butter

jam

pickle


These are all delicious items, and are highly potent for your metaphor of friendship, which is clearly that you can find all the ingredients for a friend at the grocery store, if only you pair them in the right order.

Now, I have to chastise you for your lack of imagery. There are no ponies or waterfalls in this poem at all, and I think it's disgraceful. For that, I suggest you completely rewrite this 'friendship' and start over with a fresh trip to the grocery store.

-Lumi





"The day, which was one of the first of spring, cheered even me by the loveliness of its sunshine and the balminess of the air. I felt emotions of gentleness and pleasure, that had long appeared dead, revive within me. Half surprised by the novelty of these sensations, I allowed myself to be borne away by them, and forgetting my solitude and deformity, dared to be happy."
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein