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Okay I'm going to do the impossible and write a comment on this long enough for Yewis to count as an actual review. I'm Dracula, it's Review Day, so why not?
If this was a painting, or had some fancy ink-work involved, I might be able to look at emotion and design and give a proper review. But you've basically just taken an extremely popular saying and typed it on a white page. This isn't really yours, 'cause everyone says this at some point in their lives. Add some extra words, something unique to you, and that would be so much better. Maybe even add a surprising third line with something no one ever thinks about. Or something sarcastic or funny, to make it a joke. I've got a third line in mind but I won't tell you in case you can think of it yourself. But yeah, add something to this. That's my advice.
Aaaand I think this is a review length! Yes! Hehe Happy New Year.
This is Kaos here for a review, in other words, getting this out of the Green Room. We see that this is just more of a list or a thought than anything else so I can see why you put it in 'other' but I found this to be untrue. You have to eat and sleep as well and in a primitive society, they wouldn't be doing their taxes, would they? Maybe this is true for now but it may not have been for the past when they didn't have taxes and maybe not in the future if they figure out a way to make immortality happen. These are the only things that you have to do, and outside of that, there's so much more you can do in live. If these are the only obligations in life, then everything else seems so free. It is the basics of living though, so you may want to include breathing to this list as well as you have to breathe as well to live. Hope I helped and have a great day!
So I'm scolling through the list of stories in the green room and I see "The Basicz of Living". I read the short discription and click on the link. Then I think to myself as the next page loads, 'Hm, this might be intresting, I'm sure it'll be a fun quick read'. It finished loading I saw the two words. I snorted and just laughed for a few minutes. I was right though, it was a fun quick read. I liked it.
Hi! Feather here to review!
Not much to review. I liked it. Very humorous XD.
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-Featherstone
Huh. You summed up my daily musings up in two words. Not that I have had taxes yet though. Education for death!
Truer words has never been said.