Let’s exchange a glance
Some wine for your nerves
Stumbled upon by chance
You’re acting so reversed
A bloody nose for good times
The way it ought to be
Read between opaque lines
Stop being so reserved
Revered by the many
And rejected by the few
Perhaps it’d be best to
Give a grimace or two
Revered by the many
And rejected by the few
Perhaps it’d be best to
Give a grimace or two
Let’s exchange a glance
Some wine to calm you down
You’re assured by the chance
That we’ll make no sound
A runny nose for old time’s sake
Surrender to temptation
Not for those who are fake
Hearing too many sounds
Revered by the many
And rejected by the few
Perhaps it’d be best to
Give a grimace or two
Revered by the many
And rejected by the few
Perhaps it’d be best to
Give a grimace or two
The best is yet to come
The rest is yet to move on
The best is yet to come
The rest is yet to move on
Let’s exchange a glance
Some wine to calm you down
You’re assured by the chance
That we’ll make no sound
A runny nose for old time’s sake
Surrender to temptation
Not for those who are fake
Hearing too many sounds
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Hello.
I think there is some real hidden romance hidden behind the words in this song.
It's like the person narrating it has such an eye for detail when describing the other person that it's kinda sweet. On the other hand, you may have been aiming for a creepy tone when writing it. As if the other person has been studying their lover so intently that it's become like an obsession.
I like the fact that I can't really decide on my interpretation of this and your knack for keeping the reader/listener guessing is really clever. Keep writing!
Hello there! Gonna leave you a quick review.
So, I really liked these lyrics! I was imagining this as a rap in my head xD
I loved how you worded it, too. The flow was consistent throughout, and I didn't find any of the wording awkward, which is definitely an accomplishment. I originally assumed this was a poem, so I had to edit this review a bit XD either way, it was wonderfully written, and I can't wait to read more of your work! You're very talented!
Wow, these are the lyrics? I wonder how this sounds as a song. I read it as a poem but I really can picture it as a song, I just don't know which genre it belongs to. I really like it, especially the parts about the wine and the nose. Is there a possibility that we'll be able to hear it in the future? I would definitely put it on my playlist.
Keep on writing!