Does chicken Kiev originate from Kiev? Could it originate from Kiev? The stars...they are frigid. They go to directions emotionally and praiseworthy from all the perpetrators of the food conspiracy. Chicken Kiev from Kiev? Do the citizens of said-city take ownership of the meal? We will never know, now that the world has become The Domain, which nests high up high in what would be heaven (if it exists, but I know nothing and nor do you).
I boxed it all up and found an essence before even explaining the concise concessions. Panned, down and thrown out of the bus, the leaders of women and the subordinates of intentions- laced with a smidgen of rebellion- do not rebel, but merely sit down and read books with no words on the paper. Extremely obnoxious, I imagine you'd label the writer with the crooked tooth and the square spectacles, for even attempting to rub the world out into The Domain. Bordering insanity? Perhaps that is a more apt distraction. Two of the revelations that occurred, that time we played on a frozen lake and the other time when we led the depression among others, only made the tone sepia and anti-socialism resulted from the bastardy we perpetuated.
I am on. Sometimes, I'm extremely off and offended by instrumental electromagnetism. A cheap rendition of a cheap rendition, ad infinitude.
"Oh, use me!"
"Why?"
"I want it all! I want nothing!"
I am off. Sometimes, I'm potentially on par with background music. The real, petit-bourgeois prototype of a real, petit-bourgeois prototype, ad hominem. Resort to insults and refrain from logic. Believe all. Skepticism in moderation and borderline absence; that is modernity. That cannot be satisfactory, not in any factory across all aesthetics.
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Hello KingQueenKnave, steampowered here with a review and to rescue your work from the clutches of the Green Room! I might struggle to write enough for a review here, since to be honest, I don’t have a huge amount to criticise. It’s well-written, a little crazy, and almost poetic in the choice of words and its abstract nature. Maybe you could actually make it into a poem? I feel like it could be really effective as a poem, since it flows so nicely (particularly that bit about being “on” and “off”)
One of the things I really like about your work is the way you paint pictures using words, but in a weird, abstract manner. To be honest, I don’t have a lot to criticise because it’s so different from anything else I’ve ever read, it defies criticism (I suspect this is why it has quite a few views but few reviews)
One little nitpick I spotted:
I think this should be “on a par”.
Apologies for this being such a short and probably unhelpful review, but I really don’t have much negative stuff to say about it. You have a great command of the English language (as shown through your understanding of the rules of literature and your ability to break them successfully) and you’re very unique with everything you produce. Keep writing!
-steampowered-
Hi this is Abhipsa, just stopping by for a review.
Iam a newbie to reviewing, but I like it though.
But to be honest your work doesn't require a comment. Its exotic and amazing.
And I liked the way you represented such strong content with such a seemingly silly title.
You have done a wonderful job. You have all your words in total justification of the present world. The end of the work is appreciable though. It's unlike anything I have gone through.
Great job! Keep it up!