Hello!
As I have said before, I love these types of poem. I think they are just AWESOME!! This one I loved even better.
"So I rush outside and dance in the cold tears"
I love how you described the rain as cold tears! Wonderful! I couldn't find any nitpicks on this! Great Job, and keep writing!
~Snazzy
Stay Awesome
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