Is it okay to say I'm sane?
Or am I too obsessed?
I think about this site
When I'm getting dressed!
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I water the flowers
Wondering what comes next
In my newest series.
My parents must be vexed!
*
My brother hears me singing
Rhymes of poems from this site,
And my cats must think I'm crazy
'Cause I'm not thinking right!
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I'm too busy wondering,
"What should I review?"
My dog is barking to the neighbors,
"This girl has words sprawled on her shoe!"
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Oh, what should I do?
Oh, but wait, this isn't bad.
It's just that this is the society for me!
It makes me happy when I'm sad!
Thanks, YWS, for making me so glad!
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Aw, really cute poem! I am nuts for YWS, too, considering the amount of time I spend here (though that's also because of the fact that it's my summer holidays, but still). So, really nice job, friend! I like how you wrote that even your ANIMALS seem to know that you're going slightly mad. Ha, but it's the GOOD type of mad! Also, the rhyming scheme is very good.
Keep it up!
Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it!
Hello Em101cats! CHRISSY321 here with a YWS review!
Keep writing! 
*Happy Review Day!*
Okay, I know I am only the 347839 person to review this, and I will probably say tha same thing everyone else is, but I cannot help it!
I love this work- like everyone here on YWS! I love this site so much, and I just love it when other just write about it! I agree people around me think I am obsessed too! Especially on review days! I just love writing, and then sharing with people on here!
There is just one question though- why change the rhyme scheme on the last stanza? That confused me a bit- but it is not that bad. If this were a for real poem to publish, I would have just ended it with the rhyming that you did on all the others!Other than this I saw nothing wrong! That is great!
Now for things I REALLY liked. Though I said I did not liked how the rhyme scheme did not match I did not mean that I did to like the ending! I think that it is cute, and just perfect for this little work that appreciates this site.
Overall this was the cutest little poem about YWS ever-good for you! I think that this was great, and you deserve all the star- you got a TON!
You're so sweet!
Thank you very much for the feedback! 
I love YWS too
Hello!
Describes me PERFECTLY! 
Great job! I couldn't find anything to correct! 
It was wonderfully written, and very funny. 
Keep writing poems like these! They are beautiful! 
I love this!
~Snazzy
Well helloooooo! Okay so it's Review Day and I'm struggling to find something to review so *big deep breath* I came to page twenty four and saw this, so I clicked on it and hi! Here I am to review for Team Aqua.
Now, this is a Pokemon Review Day. SO I want to do this properly. *dramatic drum roll* *Theme song starts*
I wanna be the very best
Like no one ever was
To catch them is my real test
To train them is my cause
I will travel across the land
Searching far and wide
Each Pokemon to understand
The power that's inside
Pokemon gotta catch them all its you and me
I know it's my destiny
Pokemon, oh, you're my best friend
In a world we must defend
Pokemon, a heart so true
Our courage will pull us through
You teach me and I'll teach you
Pokemon, gotta catch 'em all
Every challenge along the way
With courage I will face
I will battle every day
To claim my rightful place
Come with me, the time is right
There's no better team
Arm in arm we'll win the fight
It's always been our dream.
*Theme song ends and Team Aqua runs onto the screen*
First of all, I absolutely LOVE this poem. I don't know if it's because I'm insane (you're probably questioning my sanity right about now) or if it's just that your writing is so awesome.
Yup... this is me. I like it how you used a completely ordinary past time, like watering your flowers.
They say cats can read your mind... did you know that? Nice job anyway, using cats for that bit!
Funny, because that's what I was just wondering.
This is the cutest little ending.
I love it!!!!!
*Pokemon theme song starts again* (Okay so I won't type all that again. Bye!)
I MUST REVIEW THIS!!!!!
First thing I'd like to say is that I totally love this piece. This will be one of the few reviews I do where I don't tear it to pieces and leave holes in it after I'm done. 
Hello victorianbeauty here to give you an awesome review!!.....Thank you, Thank you! Hold the applause!....I haven't started yet!
Now that I've convinced you of my sanity, we'll get down to business.
I only have one nitpick.
This verse seems very stilted and rough to me. It's not like the rest of the piece at all. The other verses flow more and have a set rhythm of 1-2,1-2,1-2,1-2. This one is like, 1-2-3...oh, 4. It's very...stilted. Sorry, I can't find a better word! :-l
Other than that, you're grammar is perfect as far as I can tell. Your rhyming is spotless and your word choice is awesome and amazing! Great job!
Can't wait to see more from you
~victorianbeauty
Hi.
So you obviously love being on YWS XD
So much so you've written a work about this.
The rhyme scheme is very simple, quite childish, almost nursery rhyme fashion.
It was a cheery little uncomplicated piece to read.
I wouldn't ask you to change it, especially as it's personal and I can relate to some of the things you say here.
My favourite part was this bit:
The whole poem was just crazy and random. I enjoyed it.
Keep writing!
Thanks!
Heeyyyyy, have I found another obsesser of YWS over here? Your and my poem should be I Love YWS buddies!
Yes!!!
Heloooooooooooo! Dogsrule5 here to review.
First of all, I really didn't see a lot of mistakes, second of all I really liked this poem, it is kind of descriptive of how much you like this site.
Category's
Grammar: Your grammar seemed fine and I really didn't find any grammar mistakes.
Spelling: Since you are such a good speller, I really didn't see any mistakes.
Puncuation: I really didn't see any mistakes, here either. Everything punchuation mark is where it is sopposed to me!!!
Rhyming: Your rhyming scheme was fantastic, so no mistakes here.
Okay now for the good part. Well the things at the top are good, but... You get it. Because you know me. (Litterally!!) XD!
So I really thought when you rhymed it was really funny. I started laughing when I read...
This was just really funny, but as you told me you... (kind of stretched the truth. But just a little bit) At least I think you did, cause one you told me, and two, I just really know you, because (duh!!!) We are best friends forever!! XD!
Keep up the good writing.
Love,
Dogsrule5
Thanks! I know I exaggerated the truth a bit, but that's always okay. Who doesn't do that? But at least the truth shined out - I love this website.
I totally get your point!!! XD!
This is wonderful!!! It's exactly how I find myself thinking about YWS. You started off the poem so well on that very first stanza.
The only thing I can point out is that this line:
This line seems too long.
But otherwise, you did a splendid job! Congrats on getting it featured!
man you have a lot of points o.o
Thanks! It only stayed featured for about 3 minutes, but I'm hoping I can find a couple more people to Like it to put it back on that list!
Now it's first!!!
AWESOME! I might not be as insane about YWS as others are, but I can relate nonetheless. I love the form of this! I mean the last stanza... extra line... you get it XD One nitpick, but it really doesn't NEED to be fixed:
I just don't like the repetition of 'Oh', but that's just me being me :3
I still am a big fan of this, and it will be one of my favorites ^-^
Continue on, Em101cats, because you have a long way of writing to go
~puppys3117~
(P.S. This wasn't much of a review, I know, but everyone else already caught all the nitpicks, and this is so awesome that I couldn't think of words to say!
Hi Em101cats!
I like this poem, that's how I feel about any new online program on the first or second day. But for some things, it takes years to wear off. Writing is addicting, I am always thinking about it. And when I'm not, it's something to write about! Life is a book just waiting to be written. Never stop being obsessed with words, they are an art that you can do anything with. You can paint a picture in someone's mind, create a personality, those are things that are sometimes very hard to do any other way.
~Kelpies.
Hey, Em! I haven't got up with your work! Oh no. 0.0
All right.
I would take the "and" out. Conjunctions aren't normally used at the beginning of lines in poems, and really, "and" isn't nessacary here, it just sounds better without it. In some cases, it will spun much better with the conjuntion, but here it doesn't.
Okay, so what I liked:
Just basically what Cricket said! It made me smile and grin from ear to ear, cause I can easily relate. I mean, I never act crazy, but I'm always thinking about YWS! This is one thing I see in all your work: you write about things people can relate to.
Also, great vocabulary words, except maybe in the last stanza, with "bad" "sad" and "glad" which are really simple words to use. Maybe finding some synonyms in a thesaurus or using Google (ah, the miracle. Poor dictionaries XD).
Okay, now what could use some work:
First of all, in the last stanza, there is one too many lines. I know it's probably intentional but in case it isn't I just wanted to point it out.
Hmm, so it's not the most original idea, but I'm pretty sure you just wanted to spread your joy in a cute little poem.
Great job!
~WillowPaw1~
That's awesome! I am exactly like this.... But then again I've always been crazy!!
This made me smiiiiiiiiiiiiiiillleeee!!! Thanks for posting!
Hey there! We haven't talked in awhile
Thewriter13 here to give a review!
So I'll go through nitpicks, then praise, and then what could be worked on.
Nitpicks!
So this stanza is a little odd, because you're breaking sentences into two lines.
especially the line "in my newest series." the rhythm was off and you broke the syllable consistency. First off one sentence is three lines long, which doesn't happen anywhere else in the poem. So I would work on that stanza a little bit
Indentation error, I would backspace the "what should I review?"
Only stanza with five lines. It's not a major nitpick, but I'm just saying your broke consistency here yet again.
Praise
So I LOVED the topic of this poem
You did a grand job describing how addicted one can be to this site. I, myself, have to admit I do some of the same things XD
What can be worked on
I would work on your lines and your format. Also your word choice could be improved on. Like "sad" and "glad" are more Dr. Seuss rhymes and the words could be more elaborate
Overall well done!
6.5/10
Keep writing!
Well this is a poem that echoes my own excitment. I started writing over summer brake, and was very enthused to find a society of budding young writers such as you and the other fine users on this site. I am struck by how rewarding it can be to review other young writers poems, especially when that moment when you understand their emotions and you can tell they are happy. I live for that!I was also excited by the opportunity to have some talent appraise my own poems. This is a very suppoortive and loving community, and the sites administrators an staff have been very helpful! So I understand that spinge spasming feeling of excitment you get when you log on. Now on to the poem. As much of a cinic I am, and as much as I love heavy poetry, its often relieving to swap for a lighter load. So this was a very pleasing poem to me. You convey your emotions quite well. Its understandable that you might feel like your pouring to much in, but when you find your passion, feed it!, and when you find find your muse, well muse. You structured it perfectly, and since it was prose theres not much to complain about. Good job!
Very cute poem. It's good to be able to read something light and humorous every once in a while. You used rhyming very well throughout the poem. I really liked the way you talked about how those around you thought of you(or whoever this poem is about) as strange. The way that you worded that is perfect, and it's also a good representation of how non-writers(there should be a word for that) really just don't understand. Artists are crazy, and we just can't help that!
It isn't the best, but nobody's perfect. Just thought this poem would make some of you smile
Well, thanks, but I kind of like YWS.