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Locked Gateway to That Placehttp://www.thehomeplanet.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/03/Shaking_head.gifFri Sep 26, 2008 11:28 pm -

Terrible writing propmts/poemThu Sep 25, 2008 8:37 pm -

<3Thu Sep 25, 2008 6:51 pm -
blank verseThu Sep 25, 2008 2:41 am -

With taut heartstrings, your high hopes have been sustained On the bench before the piano, the litt…Tue Sep 23, 2008 6:50 pm -

A little poem..Tue Sep 23, 2008 4:53 pm -
critiques welcomeTue Sep 23, 2008 2:24 pm -

There was a moment, yesterday. Your breath caught, my stomach Twirled like a leaf in the breeze. We…Mon Sep 22, 2008 7:52 pm -
Never wanted to be a hater its in the way you are raised, intolerance and judgmental thoughts cross…Mon Sep 22, 2008 7:41 pm -

An... awkward poem. It is symbolizing mankind, and the chaos we wreck. And when someone tries to st…Mon Sep 22, 2008 7:01 pm -

There was nothing to know....Mon Sep 22, 2008 6:44 pm -

Bernadette, sweet Bernadette, please come outside and play The trees are turning yellow and red The…Mon Sep 22, 2008 7:13 am -
I hope you never know, and never feel, what it is to be lost at sea. A hopeless journey, like a dri…Sat Sep 20, 2008 4:29 am -

Blaze In the heat of the sun, I stand amongst oblivious passer-bys. As my tongue feels the whispers…Fri Sep 19, 2008 9:06 am -

GRUESOME, but beautiful :)Fri Sep 19, 2008 8:39 am -

The last thought given by any ordinary man.Fri Sep 19, 2008 8:15 am -

some of my own lyrics.Thu Sep 18, 2008 6:50 pm -

Go on! Say your goodbyes! They are filled with promises and lies. I can feel your wrath, It takes j…Wed Sep 17, 2008 3:55 am -

If, in some deep, unthought of place, The dead could congregate with grace, They'd shuffle, wartorn…Wed Sep 17, 2008 12:12 am -

One Of My Older Poems, *thismightSUCK* I Was Twelve..Tue Sep 16, 2008 11:12 pm -

a little poem i quickly knocked up so not tht good.Sun Sep 14, 2008 10:50 pm -

Locked Falling For YouWe are total opposites, Nothing do we share, So why is it that.. In my dreams last night, You were …Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:40 am -

Feeling like I'm slammed up against a wall with no turning back Keep pushing till I fall But pushin…Fri Sep 12, 2008 9:34 pm -

~XXX~Fri Sep 12, 2008 9:12 pm -
Please critique!! this is for a class assignment. Be harsh!Fri Sep 12, 2008 8:56 pm -
The Pain and suffering of the worldFri Sep 12, 2008 7:45 pm -
Rusty attempt at a poem.Fri Sep 12, 2008 8:25 am -

a little wierd poemTue Sep 09, 2008 9:31 pm -

The merciless flow once again brings on the ebb. Kindles anew, that brooding inner glow. Lights a f…Tue Sep 09, 2008 8:52 pm -

Poem written for a dreams assignment in my Western Lit classTue Sep 09, 2008 12:34 pm -

Do you love me with your heart, Or love me with your eyes? Was i cute from the start, Or did you li…Tue Sep 09, 2008 11:55 am -

We’re thinking about you We’re watching The Jazz Singer on a Sunday morning, the rain snuffing out …Tue Sep 09, 2008 11:48 am -

Last Words Of A Fallen Eve I was born into this dark world, a blooming flower in the sun. But the t…Tue Sep 09, 2008 3:59 am -

... After a fair bit of critisism, i have improved it! ^^Sun Sep 07, 2008 5:55 pm -
A ghost of my past haunts my dreams Shallow breathing, Shaking hands A whisper in the shadows of my…Sun Sep 07, 2008 5:05 pm -

a poem for all loving mothersSat Sep 06, 2008 7:20 pm -

It's time for me to crash, boom, fall. Into your open arms, that don't seem So open anymore. It's t…Sat Sep 06, 2008 5:17 pm -

if you would like a crit in return, just name the piece =]Sat Sep 06, 2008 3:50 pm -

I want to know you; More than I know myself, My hometown. My own body. I want to touch your fleetin…Sat Sep 06, 2008 3:44 pm -

I'm back!!!!! Any critiques are greatly appreciated, and I hope you will rip and tear away as you p…Fri Sep 05, 2008 9:17 pm -

Diva O Traveller! Have you not seen the angel of Hell? Her fiery touch melts my skin, Leaving a mar…Fri Sep 05, 2008 3:38 pm -

I'm sorry for how bad it is, folks, I think my poetry gland has the 'flu or something. Not unusuall…Fri Sep 05, 2008 2:33 pm -

A Day's Diamond A rising light glints at the horizon. Somehow I know, this day will never end. Some…Fri Sep 05, 2008 12:24 pm -

New Day Setting sunlight, trapped in the eye of the past, only to rise again on the new dawn. Farew…Fri Sep 05, 2008 12:00 pm -

For the first time in a while I smiled today A warm glimmer of hope ran through me How I wished you…Fri Sep 05, 2008 9:20 am -

This is about how it feels to go insane. Pull out the blade Let it go Walk away Lose control A hear…Fri Sep 05, 2008 8:45 am -

Review this please,I need your reviews to get better at thisFri Sep 05, 2008 8:16 am -

quietudeThu Sep 04, 2008 12:42 pm -
Rated to err on the side of cautionThu Sep 04, 2008 12:38 pm -
I am my god's princess i am his special kid i am always in his access His love is beyond the bid i …Thu Sep 04, 2008 11:13 am
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