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Travel in space see what’s in store, The atmosphere greets us with pleasure. Melodies soaring and w…Sun Jul 30, 2006 10:21 am -

Romancing sand-dancer, I’m on the pirate shore, hand in hand fate and infatuation. Your love burns …Sat Jul 29, 2006 4:34 pm -

this is in the form of a pantoum. ____________________________________ He spoke with marble words, …Fri Jul 28, 2006 6:14 pm -

Taken in by people's charm Innocent flirting, causing no harm, Until it leads to something deep Whe…Wed Jul 26, 2006 9:13 am -

This next poem is the latest from the scrawl of my algebra notebook. I really love it, and I don't …Sun Jul 23, 2006 8:07 pm -

dance floor sagas are created and shattered among liquid stripes of light and congealing techno bea…Sun Jul 23, 2006 8:02 pm -

(I had to write this for school. I figured I'd post it.) Feeding print in finery At the hypocenter …Sun Jul 23, 2006 7:52 pm -

Life is a pen, darling. If we cannot erase, then - must we resign ourselves to leave the page? Are …Sun Jul 23, 2006 7:47 pm -

EDIT: Second draft. All comments, crits, and such welcome. Divining Catacombs I. venery Winged Herm…Fri May 12, 2006 8:56 pm -

He Walked Among the Unspoiled Rushes He walked among the unspoiled rushes Which lined the shores of…Fri May 12, 2006 8:32 am -

Honey, where are you tonight? The stars are aligned and I can feel your fire in my soul. The light …Fri May 12, 2006 4:29 am -

Not sure where this goes. *********** EDITED: the façade is crumbling revealing in truth, a mere mo…Thu May 11, 2006 6:06 am -

I hate existententialism: the way it smears the colors, the flowers like Monet in more of a sunset …Thu May 11, 2006 5:09 am -

Hello, blonde dreary-eyed angel Satire on your cherub features, I can laugh your fears away Your br…Thu May 11, 2006 12:24 am -

All these phrases had a sort of...medical crap....feel to it. I got the feeling, yes, but the phras…Wed May 10, 2006 6:30 am -
Joggers float by, arrogant or truly happy but the ones laughing are always in groups and the scent …Tue May 09, 2006 11:17 pm -

I do not know why you became so distant, for now it hurts to be reminiscent . The bond that we shar…Mon May 08, 2006 10:57 pm -

Music Tinglies Have you ever listened to the same CD So much That when you replay it in your mind I…Mon May 08, 2006 10:41 pm -

Ha ha ha. You're exposed, You and your pack of wolves, So don't throw me your dirty looks, Because …Sun May 07, 2006 4:41 pm -

Wow. :shock: I thought that was excellent. You got the emotions across perfectly, very eloquently. …Sat May 06, 2006 8:56 pm -

After-School Sport I pick up that orange ball in my hands It's rough skin feels like alligator hide…Sat May 06, 2006 6:10 pm -

I see my life in raindrops; tiny water-bubbled memories, as they fall. And I wait for the deafening…Wed May 03, 2006 11:20 pm -

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Up until this point my life has been A collage of empty nights depleting me until I have fragmented…Mon May 01, 2006 1:30 pm -

I see you staring at me. Your face is hard, your eyes are cold. Your stare has trapped me in its ho…Mon May 01, 2006 2:24 am -
That fast mouth, I had one before. The orange peeled hemisphere- it closes you in But I've known th…Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:44 pm -

(First poem written in over 3 years. Took less than 10 minutes. No rewriting yet. Please help.) Bre…Sun Apr 30, 2006 7:58 am -
A love Unforgotten It wasn’t such a dismal thing to let him slip into the sea And let love past dim…Sun Apr 30, 2006 7:55 am -

The fierce ocean leaping over distant rocks, Moving closer to me at every heart beat. Feeling the p…Sat Apr 29, 2006 8:18 pm -
I tilted my head and bowed with my eyes, Looking farther down deep than I could have surmised. It w…Sat Apr 29, 2006 7:55 pm -

You come from a far away place, One that I cannot describe, Still, I am your champion, But I do not…Sat Apr 29, 2006 5:32 pm -

Winged Beauties of Revenge - Hear our prayers They came down with wings of evil, Fluttering as gent…Sat Apr 29, 2006 3:42 am -

A relationship is molded by the first few keystrokes Early games determine life and death and now t…Fri Apr 28, 2006 9:21 pm -

I had scribbled the date on the pink of my palm and a week later I can still hear your heavy breath…Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:32 am -
Sometimes I wonder if immaturity is a retardation of the brain ‘Cause, honey, you’re retarded First…Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:15 am -

A Deafening Silence 'Never' has a sound. Its voice is loud and echoing But it cannot distinguish it…Fri Apr 21, 2006 11:44 am -

It seems there is no escaping, from the tenacity of my being. That caught me from child's grasp, to…Fri Apr 21, 2006 2:51 am -
This was really sweet Brad... it sounds like this romantic break-up, thank you poem that... wow. I …Wed Apr 19, 2006 9:48 pm -

Listening to your words, your eyes tearing me down. My love being the only thing, to help me drown.…Wed Apr 19, 2006 6:43 pm -

Wow. I think you've finally nailed it. This has the same feeling that attracted me to your poetry i…Wed Apr 19, 2006 5:24 pm -

I shout, but none will hear me. I scream but none care. Is it possible, can they see, how miserable…Wed Apr 19, 2006 2:52 am -

there is nothing like staring dead into your eyes. the rose i gave you last night, dripping with ra…Tue Apr 18, 2006 3:45 pm -

I haven't written anything in a long time so this isn't my best. I'm a little rusty but please crit…Tue Apr 18, 2006 3:43 pm -

Well, this is sure to be a humiliating post. One of my first attempts at poetry. Any criticism and …Mon Apr 17, 2006 1:12 pm -

Granted, we had some fun times through the weeks we spent together Laughing at jokes that didn't ma…Sun Apr 16, 2006 10:23 pm -

I was going through some of my stories, and I found this piece of dialogue in one of the more recen…Sun Apr 16, 2006 4:17 am -

I always told myself to stop dreaming I’ll provide the setting for the crash Here we are – both of …Sun Apr 16, 2006 12:53 am -
Deep within my heart of love, There is a painful place, It whispers in my ear at night, And scars m…Fri Apr 14, 2006 1:01 am -
We adore danger, We enjoy fights, We crave robbers in the middle of the night, We love novels, poet…Thu Apr 13, 2006 4:02 pm -

The moon is full, the stars are out, with sand beneath my feet. I feel the wind its breezes sweet. …Thu Apr 13, 2006 1:25 pm
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