final letter to timmy

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This was really sweet Brad... it sounds like this romantic break-up, thank you poem that... wow.
I mean aside from the fact it was a bit weird to read in this bundle, the contents itself were so beautiful.
I love reading your work, and I hope everything is going to be alright with you -- as yourself, and Timmy with himself.
Excellent work Brad.




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I know this poem meant a lot to you...I don't know who this person is, nor what relations existed between you in the past or what will happen in the future between you two - if anything will happen at all. But I felt the passion from you in every texted letter, and I understood on some level. The image of kicking anthills, catching eyes and then floating away in the wind - that was perfect. This wasn't standard poetry in the sense that it had a vague rhythm that wasn't aided with it's format, but you managed a sort of poetic undertone, and for that I believe this deserves every word of praise.
Carpe Diem.



One is not born, but rather becomes a woman.
— Simone de Beauvoir, The Second Sex