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Wrote this a long time ago, I would like some opinions on itFri Aug 15, 2008 3:45 am -

Long may the terraces last They may have their faults But at least they are no longer at fault Some…Wed Aug 13, 2008 7:44 pm -

The cut up lines are meant to mimic a heart beat. It's four in the morning and I'm waking for my da…Wed Aug 13, 2008 5:17 pm -

my first piece of writing in eight long months. HELP!Wed Aug 13, 2008 3:04 am -

He’s not there every time I close my eyes anymore. I don’t feel his hands on my skin each time I mo…Tue Aug 12, 2008 5:35 pm -

Oh who am I kidding, I'm cw bound anyways. **puts on the boots** "Because what I wanted was a revol…Tue Aug 12, 2008 5:31 pm -
Read it- It's an awesome poem!Tue Aug 12, 2008 7:11 am -

The night the water came was like any other-- warm, stale, dark. A dangerous night swim; an unexpec…Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:39 pm -
It is a time For change and a time For growth Chain smoking and no boundaries “is that really me?” …Mon Aug 11, 2008 9:49 am -

As we walked on the beach Hand in hand, Our eyes would reach, Toes wiggled in sand. Our pink lips w…Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:35 am -

This is about my cousinSun Aug 10, 2008 3:13 am -

People can think differently of themelvesSat Aug 09, 2008 7:53 am -

Perfection is the ache in my chest. Beats alongside my heart and keeps the misery company. Failure …Sat Aug 09, 2008 7:17 am -

The silverware shines like your eyes did when we first met. Who’d have thought soapy spoons, forks,…Fri Aug 08, 2008 3:58 am -

Just a poem based on something that happenedFri Aug 08, 2008 1:31 am -

I wrote this almost a year ago. Tell me what you think? -------------------- [pre]Dreamed of Hell (…Thu Aug 07, 2008 10:46 pm -

I tried to edit .... but its needs work!Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:52 am -

Serenity is found in crashing waves when the white foam laughs with each slush, but is adamant in t…Thu Aug 07, 2008 2:51 am -

Ms. Apt Diagnosis Let's lie in the field of feline flowers where the blades pierce and the whiskers…Thu Aug 07, 2008 1:45 am -
A descriptive poem including myself as a 16 yr old.Wed Aug 06, 2008 8:00 pm -

One cannot write a poem about love without being in love, One cannot write a poem about death witho…Wed Aug 06, 2008 6:17 am -

When life is just too hard When the world just moves too slow It’s the releasement It’s the only th…Wed Aug 06, 2008 4:54 am -

Change moves within us It travels across souls like clouds whispering over an old sky. Lies begin t…Wed Aug 06, 2008 3:36 am -

Tea Cups of Love I put myself out there gently, sliding a delicate china tea cup across a table. My…Wed Aug 06, 2008 2:20 am -

This is a poem out of one of my stories actually, a dreamTue Aug 05, 2008 1:49 pm -
The short life of SnakeTue Aug 05, 2008 12:56 am -

Locked Hello My FriendDrink the ocean in one sip Hold onto my goodbye forever Call to make sure my feelings haven't had t…Sun Aug 03, 2008 4:29 am -

I see the scraps of morning Gently amble over-head, The farm-cat fiercely yawning Stretching, Scrat…Sun Aug 03, 2008 3:50 am -

Locked BlueI'm not sure about this one - I think the last few lines could use a bit of work. Any suggestions? …Sun Aug 03, 2008 3:10 am -

Locked Let Me CryI know this poem needs a lot of fixing so I need all the advice and crtiqiung I could possibly get!…Sun Aug 03, 2008 3:08 am -

Somewhere there is something. There is something unfamiliar; Something opposite, desperate. It’s ou…Sun Aug 03, 2008 12:39 am -

Note: Inspired by PenguinAttack's "It's Time." Thanks wifey! ^^ Bats, My Muse, Bats "Let's leave, l…Sat Aug 02, 2008 6:00 am -

Please give me any critique you have to offer :DFri Aug 01, 2008 4:16 pm -

Tell me what you think please. Stormy night. There's a crashing sound outside the window which give…Fri Aug 01, 2008 2:28 pm -

As long as you’re next to me, I’ll always feel warm; Even now in the mist of this terrible storm. Y…Fri Aug 01, 2008 4:05 am -

My grandparents' walls are covered with clocks, and the memoirs of their ship: Invictus , reads the…Fri Aug 01, 2008 3:16 am -

Time runs ever faster past the eyes Of those who do not grace its presence here So obsessed with mo…Fri Aug 01, 2008 12:49 am -

Ghostly hands caress your face Loving you isn't enough anymore Miles and hours are thorned crowns T…Thu Jul 31, 2008 11:52 pm -
This is a love poem.Thu Jul 31, 2008 6:50 pm -

Hi It's me, tennisprincess on my new account.Thu Jul 31, 2008 6:43 pm -

my first poemThu Jul 31, 2008 3:05 pm -

all these little things its so funny how all the little things don’t count in the end. i came upon …Thu Jul 31, 2008 4:34 am -

So much of me is gone. So much has dissappeared. What happens to me when I'm no longer here? I can'…Thu Jul 31, 2008 3:59 am -
I fell so hard for you I've tried so hard to make you like me To make you laugh To make you want me…Wed Jul 30, 2008 6:27 pm -

This poem is for my friend who is having father problems.Wed Jul 30, 2008 12:41 am -

The destruction of the Innocence of ChildhoodTue Jul 29, 2008 5:43 pm -

Now, normally I don't post stuff the same day I write it. But I was feeling spontaneous. Please rip…Tue Jul 29, 2008 5:34 pm -

I could really use some help with this! Do the images work? Does it make sense to anyone but myself…Tue Jul 29, 2008 3:54 pm -
(please read this)Tue Jul 29, 2008 9:18 am -

Why? Why must everyone hate me because i'm free? Or is it they hate me because i'm me? Whatever the…Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:54 am
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