Autumn Winds

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Thu Jul 31, 2008 11:52 pm
somethingcreative says... · Thu Jul 31, 2008 11:52 pm
This is an old thread, but oh well. The only thing that really bugged me was the last line

Crumbles in the wind


I just felt that crumbling in the wind fit better, as with the picture still crumbling as the wind takes hold of it.
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