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Elijah skimmed over the page stopping at the points he found interesting. He mumbled to himself, "S…Fri Jun 25, 2010 11:51 pm -

24. Fight For Words *The parts in first person are a character's thoughts* A group of kids made the…Fri Jun 25, 2010 6:40 pm -

"The thing about slow dances," I said to Seth, "is they're psychologically twisted." The corner of …Fri Jun 25, 2010 3:21 pm -

This was deleted and I no longer want it on here.Fri Jun 25, 2010 5:38 am -

Chapter Two: I lay in my new bed, looking at my new walls, and my new ceiling, and my new floor. Th…Thu Jun 24, 2010 6:55 pm -
The nurses trust me enough to let me out of the cell… for a little while. They herd me downstairs, …Wed Jun 23, 2010 6:20 pm -

Chapter One: I often find myself wondering how one persons life can go on and yet another persons c…Wed Jun 23, 2010 4:38 pm -

Its all as fake as the city we live in. The humble upbringings and slow rise to fame. A lie. No one…Wed Jun 23, 2010 8:42 am -

Here goes the chapter five. I am glad I reached here. Reviews welcome. Chapter-5 OLIVIA 3:55 AM I l…Wed Jun 23, 2010 5:35 am -

CHLOE RUSSO 26th June 12: 54 AM We were forging ahead with the case. We had found some footprints w…Tue Jun 22, 2010 5:36 am -

Hello there Funny conversation Mr. McKilt and Daniel are having here. I really like how you wrote M…Mon Jun 21, 2010 7:01 pm -
Okay, the whole title is going to be explained towards the middle of the story, as for Keith the no…Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:53 pm
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Warning: the following narrative is slightly greatly exaggerated. Names and events are similar to t…Mon Jun 21, 2010 11:37 am -

Thanks for taking the time to read and review this! This is one of my longer chapters. If you guys …Mon Jun 21, 2010 7:00 am -

The next three months were about the same. There was a physical exam every Friday, and Peter and El…Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:13 am -

It's been long since I last posted my chapter. Hope you enjoy it. Reviews welcome. I have started w…Mon Jun 21, 2010 4:52 am -
This is picking up after the 'my opinion' comment in the library. I hope you enjoy! “Whatever, Jane…Sun Jun 20, 2010 2:28 pm
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I was at home with my brother, Daniel or Danny, our parents were at work and I was getting ready to…Sun Jun 20, 2010 7:20 am -
A/N: I've decided to pick up this novel again and keep working on it. Thanks for reading! ---------…Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:41 am -
0.00 Perfection is described by the dictionary as the state or quality of being or becoming perfect…Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:56 am -
Shattered Memoires Prologue Approximately nine years before the present day The young fur looked up…Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:01 am -
Your story is pretty good, except it doesn't really pull me in and make me want to read more. I thi…Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:27 am -

CHAPTER-3 SEAN KERR 11: 25 PM 25th June, 2009 Me? Investigating a high profile case? I couldn’t bel…Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:48 am -

*Part 1 of an experimental ending to my novel. I wrote the eagle late at night, after a new day sta…Sat Jun 19, 2010 4:07 am -

I am finally through with chapter-1. Here's the link for prologue in case you missed it. A Criminal…Fri Jun 18, 2010 5:55 am -

PROLOGUE AMANDA: 10:25 PM 25th June “Please tell me you're joking,” I pleaded. Olivia’s eyes were f…Thu Jun 17, 2010 11:39 pm -

I remember standing outside our two-story home for the last time. It was winter, and in Utah that m…Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:21 pm -

Chapter 1 : Jacob "So, Jacob, I heard you went to the Alps during the summer?" I looked up from my …Thu Jun 17, 2010 2:00 pm -

*This story has had the title changed three times. Parts of the content at least five* :) 11. Flowe…Thu Jun 17, 2010 4:38 am -
Author's note: There is a prologue for this story - please read it before continuing with Chapter 1…Thu Jun 17, 2010 4:15 am -

One “I’m not going,” I stated, yet again, to my friend, Caroline. “Oh come on Alex, you can’t back …Wed Jun 16, 2010 1:01 am -

Locked Dear Diary: Chapter 101-deleted-Tue Jun 15, 2010 2:40 pm -

Hey everyone. First two chapters here and here. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post679790.html#…Tue Jun 15, 2010 1:10 pm -
Hello, my name is Abby Merton, I am 15, a sophomore student at Lancaster High School and I am at th…Mon Jun 14, 2010 10:53 am -

"This is the way it is, Arabelle. Get used to it because you can't change it," I said guiltily. It …Mon Jun 14, 2010 4:36 am -

Okay, I've changed the tense. I think it sounds better this way. If anyone sees a slip up please te…Sun Jun 13, 2010 10:06 pm -

My legs took action before I could think, springing into a sprint down the hall. I had to go blank,…Sun Jun 13, 2010 8:48 pm -
Megan Walsh balanced her Prada tote on her arm while she flipped open her cell phone. She furiously…Sun Jun 13, 2010 7:55 pm -
Taylor sauntered into her first-period History class. Clumps of students sat on desks and socialize…Sun Jun 13, 2010 7:26 pm -
My room was nearly empty. The bed was stripped from there purple polka dotted sheets and large rain…Sun Jun 13, 2010 3:41 pm -

The silence after the final bell was almost eerie. Our school is never silent- ever -and it was lik…Sun Jun 13, 2010 1:34 am -

Move ing somewhere else, my story was coupled with someone else's for reasons I don't know.Sun Jun 13, 2010 12:37 am -

Prologue: The door creaked open and Annie tiptoed across the floor. She began poking my arm trying …Sat Jun 12, 2010 8:48 pm -
Lauren hopped out of her mother’s Cadillac and carefully walked into the house. She rummaged throug…Sat Jun 12, 2010 4:47 pm -
This is a very long first chapter, so I think it would be best if everyone saved their comments unt…Sat Jun 12, 2010 8:19 am
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This isn't all the chapter; I'm still working on it. "I can't believe there's only five more days '…Sat Jun 12, 2010 12:29 am -
I've been working on this for a while now. It's about a drug dealer who's an isolated loner....ther…Fri Jun 11, 2010 3:06 am
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This is my first time attempting to write a prologue, well, novel altogether. So, I know it needs s…Fri Jun 11, 2010 12:47 am -

I don’t know which was harder, trying to keep up with a life and a child, or trying to pretend noth…Thu Jun 10, 2010 1:16 am
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