Sunday-Funday; OPENING SCENE
First draft of my assignment for creative writing class! Planning on this being the opening scene of a young adult comedy. Reviews needed BIG TIME.
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Grow Out - First Scene
Rebellious teens speak out against religion and avenge their dead friend by vandalising a church.
Friends?: Scene One (Edit version)
May is a shy girl, and is trying to make friends. Please review need to improve.
A Work In Progress - (Screenplay)
I have been working on this screenplay as an independent study for school. Please be critical. I know it's boring, I need suggestions!
the return of chip douglas
Another Short Film Script
THIS, LIKE THE LAST ONE I POSTED WAS ABOUT THE FACE OF CHANGE. THE ONE THAT I POSTED EARLIER WAS THE SUCCESSFUL ONE THIS WAS THE FAILED ONE. ENJOY!:)
Attitude Is Everything
This is a work in progress of a monologue about a teen who becomes a camp leader
Who Came Back Home?
Its a teen fiction for teenagers, action and adventure
Band Practice
A short script about conflicting taste in music. I'm using this for my audition for a film program . . .
The Great War
this is an outline for a fantasy novel
Running for Happiness
This is my first script, so please be kind but honest.
Script: Open House
Plot Jane Einsch is throwing a party at a house her father has on the market. When they say, what you don’t know doesn’t hurt, they don’t really mean that. ...
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"Shadow-less"
Setting: Grove of trees in an open schoolyard, late spring, warm, bright, field in the background Situation: A fight occured the night before, and Wilhelmina Tane (Mina) is the prime ...
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Passing Notes
Ashley: Hiya! Nicole: ‘Ello Ashley: Guess what? Nicole: What? Ashley: We have to have another pity party. Don’t skimp on the ice cream. Nicole: Why? Something happen? Ashley: Yeah...I just